【正文】 四川中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車(chē)進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題,如塞車(chē)和車(chē)禍。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。初寫(xiě)短文。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。點(diǎn)睛：寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如share with，in different ways, for example, face to face, one of +形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，make sb+形容詞，chat with， as time goes by, gradually, in a word, not only...but also...等。d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and I found her crying alone for some made me worried about her，so I hoped to cheer her first，I tried to share my favorite books and chatted with her on study after we knew each other better，I began to talk more about my everyday life with time went by，she gradually opened her heart and became used to sharing her feelings with we are good friends.In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.【解析】本文屬于話(huà)題作文，結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，闡述分享的意義。【答案】It39。你有哪些東西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自身的一次經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)一篇短文，并闡述分享的意義。山西中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語(yǔ)句表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。短文主要分三段，第一段對(duì)懷特學(xué)校學(xué)生們的到來(lái)表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話(huà)引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。句式表達(dá)以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復(fù)合句，如賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等，提升文章檔次。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。根據(jù)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)充實(shí)寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。參考要點(diǎn)：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來(lái)好運(yùn)……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國(guó)懷特學(xué)校的校長(zhǎng)Green 先生寫(xiě)一封信，介紹他們學(xué)校的學(xué)生來(lái)你校參觀時(shí)的活動(dòng)安排以及理由。英國(guó)懷特學(xué)校下學(xué)期組織學(xué)生來(lái)你校學(xué)習(xí)了解中國(guó)文化，請(qǐng)你以李明的身份給該校校長(zhǎng)Mr. Green寫(xiě)一封郵件，介紹你校的相關(guān)活動(dòng)安排及其理由。14．（根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。重慶中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力，這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。要學(xué)以致用。書(shū)面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己。如果沒(méi)有煙花，人們會(huì)比以前更不感興趣。此外，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。 另一方面，有些學(xué)生不同意。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對(duì)他們的眼睛很危險(xiǎn)。更重要的是，人們喜歡在午夜放假，外面總是那么吵，很多人睡不好覺(jué)。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱。盡量使用高分句型。人稱(chēng)主要為第三人稱(chēng)和第一人稱(chēng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā３Ｖ菔姓l(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護(hù)環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問(wèn)題。注意： 1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3. 表達(dá)，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。你們班級(jí)的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。12．（它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Weekend HouseworkI was busy last weekend. I did housework all the day. In the morning, I cooked breakfast. To be honest, I like cooking very much. Because cooking meals is very interesting. I can do what I want. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor and took out the rubbish. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like do any washing. In the afternoon, I cleaned my bedroom. I hate cleaning my room .It is boring and tiring. In the evening, I folded my clothes and made my bed. I think it was a busy weekend.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如all the day，in the morning，to be honest，like cooking，very much，after breakfast，go to the store，do the shopping，take out，do some washing，make my bed等。陜西師大附中中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)以“My Weekend Housework”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，談一談上星期天你做過(guò)的家務(wù)活，并介紹你喜歡做的家務(wù)活和不喜歡做的家務(wù)活，并談?wù)勀阕黾覄?wù)的感受。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。第二，短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.A