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【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞剑鷦泳唧w,條理分明。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇???键c(diǎn):提綱類作文。該文中以下幾個句子用得很好。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,要點(diǎn)全面。并注意上下文要語句貫通。要注意把每一個要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來,不要遺漏任何一個,書寫時一定注意時態(tài)的正確使用。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文,而且要做到表達(dá)清楚,語句通順,意思連貫。,騎電動車不安全;,騎電動車也快不起來。注意:;,書寫工整、規(guī)范;。9.上周,你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。文章共分為三個方面的內(nèi)容,首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀,然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因,最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。s contribution (貢獻(xiàn)) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。參考詞匯:哺乳動物mammal。要求:1)恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級和最高級;2)80詞左右。目前數(shù)量在減少,因?yàn)椋?)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。8.假如你是李華,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。在介紹長相時用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時也可以包括日?;顒?。另外在寫作時可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時,會用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best frien