【正文】 此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書。注意：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。would like to do想做某事； respect each other 彼此尊重； get along well with sb與某人相處融洽；volunteer to help people in 17．（Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. 【答案】Dear Sir, I would like to remend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me.In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family.What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful.Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations.I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.Yours FaithfullyJack【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。2. 詞數(shù)100字左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假如你叫Jack，你所在的小區(qū)正在進(jìn)行“模范家庭”的評(píng)選活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)下表提示的內(nèi)容給社區(qū)中心寫一封英文推薦信向他們推薦你的家庭。16．（而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most wele and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, munication bees easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118） 【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。假如你是李華，你對此很感興趣，準(zhǔn)備投稿，談?wù)勀闳粘５慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺堋．?dāng)今交流方式很多，但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。15．（短文中長短句結(jié)合，使文章富于變化，有節(jié)奏感。短文首先介紹了自己對三年初中生活、老師以及同學(xué)們的感受；然后介紹了自己在這三年里后悔的事情；接下來是對未來的計(jì)劃以及對老師和同學(xué)們的祝福。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文?？梢远嘤煤唵尉?，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)、主系表結(jié)構(gòu)等，點(diǎn)綴一些并列句和復(fù)合句或較高級(jí)的句型，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化。題目中列出了一些要點(diǎn)，如初中生活的感受、難忘的事情或時(shí)刻、后悔的事情、未來的計(jì)劃，然后再加上一個(gè)自然的結(jié)尾。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無法忘記的。四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）寫作。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicio