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(英語(yǔ))九年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編解題技巧分析及練習(xí)題(含答案)含解析一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)匯編1.(安徽中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是華,你的英國(guó)筆友對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣,想到中國(guó)旅行感受中國(guó)文化。你想請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。1位置:中國(guó)東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開(kāi),秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫(xiě)信,邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候;接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化,并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)合理安排幾個(gè)內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。另外,英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,因此寫(xiě)作時(shí)不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),寫(xiě)完整的句子。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯(cuò)。但為提升文章檔次,也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句,以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。短文有如下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,并對(duì)細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充和修飾,使內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、豐富。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng),然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等,并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰,層次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)敘述,注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。2.(江蘇中考模擬)寫(xiě)作: 81. 目前,很多高中都開(kāi)設(shè)了特色課程,涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容,很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性,但也有人持不同的看法。 作為即將升入高中的你,對(duì)于特色文化課程有何看法?請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能;2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神;3. ……不贊同1. 過(guò)多占用學(xué)生時(shí)間,耽誤學(xué)習(xí);2. 需要投入更多的錢(qián),增加家庭壓力;3. ……你的觀點(diǎn)1. ……2. ……要求:1. 表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法正確,上下文連貫;2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):100左右(文章開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入)4. 不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,如carry on,first of all,like to do,play a game,this kind of,What’s more,give up,with the help of,so much time,pay attention to,on the paper,put up等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It’s not only improve our abilities but also give us much students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. / I think it’s good to have special ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c(diǎn)睛】書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3.(遼寧中考模擬)(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)放松自己.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.,希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,定語(yǔ)從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。4.(如皋市實(shí)驗(yàn)初中中考模擬) 亞洲文明對(duì)話大會(huì)近期在北京召開(kāi),你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會(huì)相關(guān)報(bào)道,對(duì)華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣,來(lái)信向你了解中國(guó)文化。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信給Danny。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久,文化各異;傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,多彩習(xí)俗(舉一例)文明行為相互尊重,以禮相待;互學(xué)共鑒,共同成長(zhǎng)(或自擬)身邊文明校園文明(自擬一點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn),可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮,是短文連貫,通順。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名