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(英語)九年級下冊英語英語書面表達匯編解題技巧分析及練習(xí)題(含答案)含解析一、中考英語書面表達匯編1.(安徽中考模擬)書面表達假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信,邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來這里最好的時候;接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化,并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時,注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容,分清主次,并注意上下文的連貫。另外,英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次,也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句,以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游,并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點:首先文章內(nèi)容完整,包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容,并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾,使內(nèi)容更加充實、豐富。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請,然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等,并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰,層次清楚,主次分明。第二,短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準確,句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述,注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。2.(江蘇中考模擬)寫作: 81. 目前,很多高中都開設(shè)了特色課程,涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容,很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性,但也有人持不同的看法。 作為即將升入高中的你,對于特色文化課程有何看法?請根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能;2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神;3. ……不贊同1. 過多占用學(xué)生時間,耽誤學(xué)習(xí);2. 需要投入更多的錢,增加家庭壓力;3. ……你的觀點1. ……2. ……要求:1. 表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3. 詞數(shù):100左右(文章開頭已給出,不計入)4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如carry on,first of all,like to do,play a game,this kind of,What’s more,give up,with the help of,so much time,pay attention to,on the paper,put up等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It’s not only improve our abilities but also give us much students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. / I think it’s good to have special ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。3.(遼寧中考模擬)(B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80100 We Get from Sports 的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點:1,學(xué)生參加體育運動的興趣不同,理由各異.,通過運動來放松自己.,希望運動能使自己更強壯.,希望運動使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條..:文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字,不計入詞數(shù).:keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in mon an interest in 【答案】Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩\動的觀點和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),寫作要點要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點、男生的觀點、女生的觀點)。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達符合英語習(xí)慣,準確運用時態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時間狀語從句,定語從句,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。4.(如皋市實驗初中中考模擬) 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開,你的印度朋友Danny收看了大會相關(guān)報道,對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣,來信向你了解中國文化。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給Danny。要點內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久,文化各異;傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,多彩習(xí)俗(舉一例)文明行為相互尊重,以禮相待;互學(xué)共鑒,共同成長(或自擬)身邊文明校園文明(自擬一點)注意:1. 詞數(shù)90詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點,可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮,是短文連貫,通順。3. 文中不得提及真實的人名、校名