【正文】 章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。5．（北京中考模擬）4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華，請你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號召。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。提示詞語：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應(yīng)用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，寫出對學(xué)生的倡議。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述倡議時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。6．（北京中考模擬）環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題：● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins. I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let’s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。句型：When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins；Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。7．（濟(jì)陽縣第二實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容包括：； 。要求：；、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I can see a boy and a girl in the picture. They are ing back from school. On their way home, they find so much rubbish outside the dustbin and decide to put it into the dustbin. The boy also es up with an idea. He puts up a sign on the dustbin to remind people of protecting the environment. The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter, we should stop them and pick up the rubbish. The environment should be protected by everybody. We should be civilized citizens.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇看圖作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題目要求“； ?！笨芍恼掠靡话悻F(xiàn)在時。人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——描述圖片內(nèi)容。按順序分別描述四幅圖的內(nèi)容：男孩和女孩放學(xué)回家的路上，看到垃圾到處都是，女孩撿起垃圾放到了垃圾桶，男孩畫了一個標(biāo)志貼到垃圾桶上。注意這一部分用用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第三人稱。第二部分：文章主體——呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境?！鞘惺俏壹?，保護(hù)靠大家。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——做合格的市民。8．（丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬）初級寫作今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕，環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等，而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫一篇短文。提示：存在問題：；；； .要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少34個方面，80100詞?！敬鸢浮縏he environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People39。s health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it39。s time for us to protect our world． Firstly，we shouldn39。t throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don39。t use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：先仔細(xì)審題，這是寫好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來，一定要確定好文章的重點(diǎn)，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短語和句式，增加文章的色彩．本