【正文】 例 9. I will furnish it to be beautiful. ?I will furnish it and make it beautiful. 注意：英語中沒有 furnish something to be + 形容詞結(jié)構(gòu) 。 例 5. We changed selfish and hardhearted. ?We became / turned selfish and hardhearted. 注意： change 不是系動(dòng)詞 ， 不能直接跟形容詞 。 改錯(cuò)句： 例 1. We saw a river blocked our way. ?We saw a river blocking our way. 例 2. I saw an old man going out of City Park and was about to cross Park Road. ? I saw an old man going out of City Park and he was about to cross Park Road. 例 , a yellow car turned right from 3rd Street, arrived at Park Road. ? Suddenly, a yellow car turned right from 3rd Street to Park Road. 例 4. She drove the car leave the street. ? She drove the car leaving the street. / She left the street in the car. 例 5. She is always warning me, telling me don’t do this, don’t do that. ?She is always warning me, telling me not to do this or that. 例 6. We need talented young people make China strong. ?We need talented young people to make China strong. 例 7. I have wide interests such as reading novels, watching films, play tennis and so on. ? I have wide interests such as reading novels, watching films, playing tennis and so on. 例 we master the advanced knowledge and technology can we serve our country more efficiently. ? Only when we master the advanced knowledge and technology can we serve our country more efficiently. 例 9. Money can’t instead of everything in our life. ? Money can’t replace everything in our life. 例 10. I know that there are many students still live in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. ?I know that there are many students still living / who still lives in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. ?I know that many students still live in poverty, and they wanted to go to school very much. （ 三 ） 詞的用法與所用句型不配套 例 1. An Englishman teaches our English. ?An Englishman teaches us English. 注意： teach, give, pass, show, buy, sing, send, borrow, lend等有時(shí)跟一個(gè)賓語 、 有時(shí)須跟雙賓語 。 定語： United States is a developed country. It is also a country developed in tourism. 美國(guó)是一個(gè)發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家也是旅游業(yè)發(fā)達(dá)的國(guó)家 。 主語： 1. Being a president is not easy. 當(dāng)總統(tǒng)不容易 。 它不能獨(dú)立成句子 ， 除非把從句的引導(dǎo)詞 ， 如 because， if 等去掉 。 3) 在說明一層意思時(shí)，主語不隨意轉(zhuǎn)換。 2）使用豐富的詞匯和詞組 start off, horizon, prepare our minds for, a piece of wood, forest, wonder, show me the way, arrive at, in charge of, set up, make a fire, believe it or not, delicious ； ， 所以文章的語言連貫 、 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 。 簡(jiǎn)單句： After that, we entered a forest. After a long walk, we finally arrived at the campsite. 復(fù)合句： Li Ming and I started off, when the sun was rising from the horizon, singing happily. We first climbed a mountain, then swam across a river when our bags also ―swam‖ on a piece of wood. 復(fù)合句： I was in charge of setting up the camp while Li Ming made a fire and cooked our dinner. Believe it or not, it was the most delicious meal I’ve ever had! 并列句： We had pass, camp, bread, map, light, matches, knife, clothes, flashlight and firstaid kit in our bags and prepared our minds for the hard training. （ 2 ） 交叉使用長(zhǎng)句 、 短句 。主題突出（支撐句） 3。 寫記敘文要求你做到： 1）按事件發(fā)生的先后順序敘述具體完整； 2）記敘文大多按時(shí)間順序敘述；也有倒敘或穿插手法； 3）要重點(diǎn)突出，內(nèi)容完整，條理清楚，詳略得當(dāng)；主次分明； 4）記敘文一般記述過去發(fā)生的事，多用過去時(shí)態(tài)寫。 應(yīng)用文范文 May I have attention, please? I have announcement to make. The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to wele our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 pm. There will be music, dancing,singing, games and exchanging of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose ? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Don’t fet :7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is wele. 2. 說明文 (expository writing) 說明文是用說明的方法以簡(jiǎn)明的文字介紹事物的形狀、性質(zhì)、構(gòu)造、變化、成因、結(jié)果、功用、特征的文章 。 緊扣要點(diǎn)，連詞成句 (1) 60% of the students believe that a public park should be charged. (2) People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. (3) To build gates and walls will do harm to the appearance of a city. （ 4） 40% think that fees should be charged low. （ 5） You need money to pay gardeners and workers. （ 6） You need to buy plants and young trees. 4。 掌握寫作規(guī)范技巧 一、 寫對(duì)格式：不同文體要求規(guī)范 二、 寫好三部分：開頭、中間、結(jié)尾 三、 規(guī)范三寫：大小寫； 拼寫和書寫 規(guī)范達(dá)標(biāo) 四、 突破四關(guān)：要點(diǎn)全面、語言無誤、 表達(dá)清楚、行文連貫。 （ 5） 檢查完善 – 有 40分鐘時(shí)間查拼寫 、 用詞 、 事態(tài) 、 連詞 、 標(biāo)點(diǎn) 、 內(nèi)容等 。 （ 5） 注意支撐句段要緊扣主題 。 （ 2） 適當(dāng)背一些合適的范文 ：如新概念上的小文 ， 高考參考答案等 。練習(xí)環(huán)節(jié) （ 1）高考例題點(diǎn)評(píng) （ 2）學(xué)生習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng) （ 3）書面表達(dá)練習(xí) 習(xí)作練習(xí) 短文改錯(cuò) 改寫練習(xí) 潤(rùn)色練習(xí) 養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣 一、書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。 書面表達(dá) 訓(xùn)練技巧 寫作基礎(chǔ)三大要素： 1。 寫作質(zhì)量指內(nèi)容和書面形式，不可或缺。 主要是背常用的句型和短語詞組 。 步驟 : （ 1） 擬基本點(diǎn) – 找出 56個(gè)動(dòng)詞或搭配 ， 進(jìn)入基本點(diǎn) 。 （ 4） 潤(rùn)色 – 改變句型 ， 如：簡(jiǎn)單句可變成復(fù)合句 ， 讓句子豐滿起來 。 例題： 2020NMET 60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為 ，需建大門 會(huì)影響城市形象 1。分清層次，連句成篇 (2020NMET) Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will bee