【正文】 考點(diǎn)：材料作文。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn)，所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。，幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。短語和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…），“as time went by”（隨著時(shí)間的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大進(jìn)步），“keep on learning”（繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)），“In a word”（總而言之）等等短語使用正確。：?jiǎn)卧~短語：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí)，形容詞放后面。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。courses，Ilearnlikeyou文章中語言得體，語句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。文章是按照時(shí)間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌，這一部分使用了過去時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞都變成了過去式，形式準(zhǔn)確。表達(dá)時(shí)，需要注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯表格中的語句，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型來表達(dá)。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。越來越多的人有自己的汽車；生活舒適。過去生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊。銜接自然，順暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡(jiǎn)單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對(duì)措施立即阻止此類活動(dòng),治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and yo