【正文】 ble life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。3．安全對每個人都很重要。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)容。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。注意事項(xiàng)：，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時，連詞的使用。句式豐富。6．書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。be in use（投入使用）；旅游：每年有成千上萬來自各地的游客。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。7．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80100詞． 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩．請根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程，按內(nèi)容及要求，用英文完成寫作．內(nèi)容包括：1．Whichdocanit/them？寫作要求：1．依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程（數(shù)量不限）；2．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名．a(chǎn)ll本題屬于材料作文，主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。條理清晰。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時，形容詞放后面等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個問題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運(yùn)用過去時態(tài)。9．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來！請你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計(jì)劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會計(jì)劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計(jì)劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy