【正文】 That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a plaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇學(xué)校英語興趣小組的活動(dòng)中的發(fā)言稿。有些鄰居有意見，認(rèn)為音樂很吵，無法入睡。（2）從那時(shí)起，奶奶喜歡上了廣場舞。要點(diǎn)提示如下:（1）幾個(gè)月前，奶奶晚飯后去跳廣場舞（do square dancing）。（4）（2）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯就是必用詞匯，一定要運(yùn)用到文章當(dāng)中。讀書的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí)，開闊視野 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多，無良好讀書習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書，不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進(jìn)了新公寓。將來希望……（兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。這兩個(gè)地方需要學(xué)生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。學(xué)校英語校刊《英語天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾撸?qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。最后還要加上自己的看法。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save energy；brush our teeth；put it into different bins；take action；make a big difference。7．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 商品 goods。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。初寫短文。修改潤色。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。避免漢語式英語。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。請(qǐng)以Dream Chaser為題，談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；正確面對(duì)困難，積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查；respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母；look after照顧；make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持