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。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。10.書面表達(dá)。:高分短語:feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。:例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容;時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主,主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。要點(diǎn)提示:,并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實(shí);,使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;,積極參加社會活動;。所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。9.書面表達(dá)“Life is like a box of of never know what you are going to get next.”Forrest Gump 中文譯名:《阿甘正傳》“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名:《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers(追夢人).”President Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們:生活是豐富多彩的,有快樂幸福也有傷心失落。在說選擇城市A的原因時,用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。對于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出,因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情,作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。寫作亮點(diǎn):本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。句型不要都用簡單句。熟悉英語的表達(dá)方式。食物等相關(guān)信息,要求考生對每個信息進(jìn)行比較,選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。8.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文,內(nèi)容須包括:對下表中關(guān)于(City A和City B)的全部信息進(jìn)行比較,分析利弊,確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。構(gòu)思提綱。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;;:100詞左右,文章開頭已給出,但不計入總數(shù)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage);節(jié)約時間;避免擁擠、勞累,品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage), 看不到商品本身, 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯:網(wǎng)購shopping online?!熬W(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚,越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。句型:When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。例文點(diǎn)評:例文采用的是三段式;用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么;時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述建議時,描寫具體,條理清晰。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么,為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么,以及你的期望。6.環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé), 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護(hù)自然資源,相信我們的家園會越來越美好。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been pa