【正文】 l in industrialized countries was much greater at years in 1980, pared to years in developing countries.? than句型也可以。The length of time people spend at school in industrialized was more 6 years than that in developing countries( VS ).第三篇：雅思寫(xiě)作小作文線圖雅思作文范文：女性犯罪率高的原因?yàn)閹椭蠹腋脺?zhǔn)備雅思考試，現(xiàn)在陸續(xù)為大家提供雅思作文考試最新真題和范文，希望對(duì)大家有幫助?。垩潘碱}目］Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence for young women is possible reasons and remendations to the ［雅思作文寫(xiě)作范文］It is reported that the proportion of young female criminal unfolds a steady increasing trend，and women crime，especially the young female39。s delinquency has bee a serious social problem women，as the most peaceable parts of human，are always regarded as the last aim by the police they go astray is mainly due to the two following reasons： one is their own character peculiarity，the other is from social far as the former，for one thing，the female is sensitive to the trifles and sentimental to the reins and often puts them to the edge unnecessarily and forms extreme ideas，which frequently leads to direct of sensibility makes them so depressed and despaired that they have a high probability to do the illegal behavior when they slip down in for the latter reason，the social pressure es of traditionally sexual discrimination and survival is no denying the fact that the contemporary including the women are confronted with the more severe petition than their ancestors were，and in addition to this point，females still have to struggle with the deepbooted young women make their debut in the society，all kinds of crises，trouble and pressure lay them into flat，which pels them to avenge and relieve their feeling with lawless methods in unassisted of young female criminal reveals longterm negligence to the female39。s inner and outer is almost impossible to change female39。s nature，so the society should take more care of women，especially for the young example，some psychological courses and the methods of solving problem are effective measures to adjust the mood of the meantime，prejudice to women should be out of the social stage and fair，equal and friendly atmosphere should be set up，which can help women to take part in the formal and rational ，the society should approbate the female39。s indispensable position of munity and encourage them to show their special aptitude and ，the rising criminal rate of young women has relation to both females themselves and irrational social and equity are the best way to solve this increasing problem，after all，they are less :關(guān)于博物館的描述聲明：我們編發(fā)范文目的是為讓廣大考生熟悉雅思作文寫(xiě)作方法，切記不可以背誦，否則有可能得到非常低的分?jǐn)?shù)，甚至0分。Introduction(44 words)It is well known that a museum is a building to display a collection of artistic,historical,cultural or military museums can have a variety of purposes in the city。I think two roles the museums play can illustrate they areworth (89 words)Visiting museums is informative.(topic sentence)Once I visited a military museum的in Beijing,China, soon I learned that an ancient warrior might have outfought his enemies in bat if he had had great strength while a modern soldier should be armedwith sophisticated present soldiers should spend far much time on的studying modern technology instead of building up , If you visit other museums, you will have a better perception on a certain field, because you 的can witness some genuine objects which cannot be seen on (65words)In addition, a museum can function to cultivate one39。s sense of patriotism.(topic sentence)In china, schools often organize trips to some historical the students 的learn that many years ago, a number of countries invaded China robbing treasure and killing Chinese civilians, promptly they will establish a strong sense to defend the nation, revealing that only a strong motherland can give them pride and (74words)Now we talk about how to fund a museum can never be considered as a financial burden to suggest that the Government should invest a small amount of money on advertisements for the museums in the example, ads of the museums should be forwarded on the travel brochures or maps of the tourists e and admission tickets are reputation and funds are (23 words)In brief, museums should play a role as an instructive means of the city and ines from admission can keep them running properly.第四篇：雅思小作文柱狀圖寫(xiě)作：重在數(shù)據(jù)描述雅思小作文柱狀圖寫(xiě)作:重在數(shù)據(jù)描述 在雅思小作文的圖表中，柱狀圖的出現(xiàn)頻率非常高，而且相對(duì)來(lái)講還是比較難的，這是因?yàn)橹鶢顖D的分析比較復(fù)雜。所以大家掌握一些雅思小作文柱狀圖的寫(xiě)作技巧還是很有必要的。柱狀圖的寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)無(wú)非就是數(shù)據(jù)的描述，一般可以分為兩種情況，就是根據(jù)每個(gè)組里的柱子的個(gè)數(shù)，有單柱子和多柱子。第一種情況，單柱子。這種情況好寫(xiě)，就是分別說(shuō)一下就可以了，如果是以時(shí)間為橫軸的話，就寫(xiě)一下趨勢(shì)，如果是以組為橫軸，則直接寫(xiě)。第二種情況，多柱子。這個(gè)情況比較麻煩，數(shù)據(jù)少比如每個(gè)組里就兩個(gè)柱子，可以全寫(xiě)，如果數(shù)據(jù)比較多，比如每個(gè)組里有六個(gè)柱子，那就取幾個(gè)最大或者最小的就行，也就是說(shuō)在比較的過(guò)程中想要拿到想要的結(jié)果就要找對(duì)比鮮明的那一對(duì)就對(duì)了。把對(duì)比最鮮明的幾個(gè)柱子描述清楚，其他的可以一帶而過(guò)。注意：對(duì)于柱狀圖，數(shù)據(jù)太多，則起點(diǎn)，結(jié)點(diǎn)和數(shù)量相等點(diǎn)必寫(xiě)，倍數(shù)點(diǎn)必寫(xiě)。這是因?yàn)檫@些點(diǎn)都是非常有代表性的點(diǎn)，分析這些點(diǎn)就可以基本看出這些柱狀圖分析的主要結(jié)果了。以上就是關(guān)于柱狀圖的雅思小作文的寫(xiě)作技巧，而且這是最簡(jiǎn)單的技巧介紹，最適合大家記憶和應(yīng)用的了?？戳思记芍螅蠹蚁胍嬲恼莆站捅仨毜没ㄒ欢ǖ臅r(shí)間來(lái)練習(xí)了。