【正文】 “獨立主格結構”The consumption of hamburgers and pizza has risen steadily over the 20 year period to 1990 while the consumption of fish and chips has been in decline over that same period with a slight increase in popularity since 1985.? 用一個表示對照的連詞while說明上升趨勢的hamburgers和下降趨勢的fish and chips 注意上升和下降的表達 252。 上升 has risen steadily 252。 下降 has been in decline ? 表示段時間 over the 20 year period to 1990, over the same period ? with a slight increase in popularity用with 從句補充說明大趨勢下的小變化詞匯句型積累重點和難點是表示倍數(shù)關系的比較句型 ? N times as+ 形容詞或副詞原級…as ? N times+ 形容詞或副詞的比較級…than這兩者均表示“是幾倍”，并非“多出幾倍”，特別注意，很多參考書都寫錯了 表示三種的順序關系 A, followed by B, then C，這個表達在餅圖中很常用 表示變化趨勢? 表示上升 rise, be in increase ? 表示下降 be in decline, drop八分作文柱狀圖顯示的是1970－1990二十年間英國人每周在快餐上花費了多少錢；曲線圖展示的是這二十年間快餐消費的趨勢。The bar chart shows how much money was spent on fast foods per week in the UK over a span of 20 years from 1970 to 1990 while the graph reveals the trend of fast food consumption over the same period of ，各收入階層在漢堡和魚煎薯條這兩種快餐上的支出相對高于在皮薩上的消費；曲線圖反映出漢堡與皮薩的消費呈現(xiàn)上升趨勢，魚煎薯條則呈現(xiàn)出波動趨勢。As we can see from the chart, the weekly expenses of people of different ine levels on hamburgers and fish and chips were relatively higher than that on graph indicates that while hamburger and pizza consumption both revealed a general trend of increase, fish and chips showed a trend of ，高收入階層和中等收入階層每周在漢堡上的平均消費分別是每人42便士和33便士，比低收入階層的14便士搞出了很多。在魚煎薯條方面，高收入階層的支出略低，是17便士，但中等及低收入階層的支出都分別達到了25便士和18便士，相對于在皮薩方面支出的12便士和8便士高出了很多。值得一提的是高收入階層在皮薩上的消費高于魚煎薯條2便士，為20便士。First, the weekly average expenses of highine people and middleine people were 42 pence and 33 pence respectively, a lot higher than that of lowine people which was 14 for fish and chips, highine people spent relatively less, only 17 pence, but the expenses of middleine and lowine groups reached 25 pence and 18 pence, much higher than their expenses on pizza which stood at 12 pence and 8 pence is worth mentioning is the amount of money spent on pizza by highine people which showed only 20 pence, 2 pence more than their expense on fish and ，從1970年的每周平均85克開始，人們在漢堡上的消費緩步增長到了1975年的100克，然后，消費量加大增速，到1983年左右已經(jīng)達到了200多克。接下來，我們看到的是更強勢的增長，到1990年達到了圖表上的最高峰550克。Second, starting from averagely 85 grams per week in 1970, people’s consumption of hamburgers gradually grew to 100 grams in 1975 and was then followed by a faster growth, reaching more than 200 grams in around then on, the growth gained a stronger momentum, hitting the peak across the board at 550 grams in ，皮薩的消費趨勢與漢堡相仿，也是很明顯的三個增長階段，但是增幅沒有漢堡那么大。1970年至1980年，皮薩的消費從平均每周40克慢慢增長到80克；1980年至1985年，增長加快，從80克增加到了130克；1985年至1990年，增幅加大，從130克快速增長到了280克。Third, the consumption of pizza revealed a similar trend of growth as that of hamburgers and could also be clearly cut into three periods, though the growth rate was not that rose slowly from 40 grams per week in 1970 to 80 grams in 1980 and then grew faster from 80 grams in 1980 to 130 grams in 1985, the growth rate was even faster and we see a big increase from 130 grams to 280 ，魚煎薯條的消費趨勢在波動中呈現(xiàn)了三種狀態(tài)。1970年至1975年一直是緩慢的下降，從平均每周300克降至280克；之后，從1975年至1985年，下降速度稍有加快，從280克降至200克；自此，開始逐漸回升，到1990年攀升到了240克。Fourth, the consumption of fish and chips showed three changes in the general trend of 1970 to 1975, it dropped slowly from the original 300 grams per week in 1970 to 280 grams in on, from 1975 to 1985, it dropped a little bit faster when it fell from 280 grams to 200 then on, it began to rise gradually and till 1990, it had climbed back to 240 ，英國人在上述所提及的三種快餐方面的消費在圖表所標識的二十年里都發(fā)生了或增或降的某些變化。To sum up, the consumption of the three above mentioned fast foods in Britain showed certain rises and falls as illustrated in the chart and graph over the designated 20 題目The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown chart shows the number of hours enjoyed by men and women in a typical week in 1998 – 9, according to gender and employment those employed fulltime, men on average had fifty hours of leisure, whereas women had approximately thirtyseven were no figures given for male parttime workers, but female parttimers had forty hours of leisure time, only slightly more than women in fulltime employment, perhaps reflecting their work in the the unemployed and retired categories, leisure time showed an increase for both sexes, as might have been too, men enjoyed more leisure time – over eight hours, pared with seventy hours for women, perhaps once again reflecting the fact that women spend more time working in the home than , housewives enjoyed approximately fiftyfour hours of leisure, on were no figures given for househusbands!Overall, the chart demonstrates that in the categories for which statistics on male leisure time were available, men enjoyed at least ten hours of extra lei