【正文】 rwise, after all, as a matter of fact, different from, in spite of, on the contrary, on (the) one hand, on the other hand, except for, in contrast, even so/though … （ 6）表示列舉 namely, for example/instance, take … for example, such as, for one thing, for another, on one hand, on the other hand, to illustrate, to give another example, a case in point, that is … （ 7）表示解釋 that is … ， that means … , it means that … , what I mean is that … , let me put it in this way, when I said … , I meant… , in other words, （ 8）結束話題 therefore, finally, accordingly, so, consequently, thus, hence, briefly, above all, as a result, in short, in a word, in brief, to be brief, in conclusion, as a result, in general, on the whole, all in all, in all, by and large, generally speaking, in summary, to conclude, to sum up, to summarize … Example what is important …? when exhibiting at a trade fair ? staff selected ? enough written information If you ask me what is important when exhibiting at a trade fair, the first two things that cross my mind are the staff selected and the amount of written information for vistors. 開門見山，言簡意賅，一句話包含兩個點，無語法錯誤，用詞高級。 To select appropriate staff for the exhibition stand is essential, because at that moment, the staff represents the whole pany’ s image. The goodlooking, polite, sharp, and eloquent staff represents the positive image of your pany, while the lazy, rude, dull, silent staff indicates your pany’ s inpetency. 要點 1原因 1如果 … ，就 … ， 如果 … ， 就 …. 有中心句，有進一步說明，還有詳細例子。 Furthermore, the pany should provide enough written information for visitors. That’ s simply because the written information about your pany and your products will attract visitors’ interest and provide them some basic information. If the written information is impressively clear and suffient, it can turn vistors into your future customers or business partners. If it’ s poorly anized and full of mistakes, it ruins the pany image and the good chance of selfpromotion. 遞進關系，有連接詞，有要點，有原因，有細化例子 So I think the staff selected and enough written information are the two most important things we shoud never neglect when exhibiting at a trade fair. 一句話總結，言簡意賅，重申觀點，首尾呼應。 整個講話結構完整，邏輯性強，有自然過渡，內容明確，論證充分，句子結構并不簡單，用詞高級。 怎樣填充時間？怎樣把簡單句變得復？ 名詞前面加形容詞或定語，動詞前面或后面加副詞，形容詞前面加副詞，加各種從句，加補足語，加狀語，加同位語。 基本句子結構上加各種修飾成分，把信息細化。 A friend of mine failed a major chance to work in a big pany at a very promising position, simply because he was so careless that he fot to include his personal contact information in the job application. Practice makes perfect! ? The eyes ? The voice ? Expression ? Appearance What is important when selecting staff (for promotion)? Experience Academic certificates What is important when considering a career change? financial rewards further study or training opportunities for future promotion What is important when motivating employees? training opportunities career development opportunities bonus What is important when selecting a retail sales assistant? ? Previous experience ? Appearance What is important when contacting clients by telephone? ? Calling at the right time ? Listening carefully See you next time!