【正文】 Legendl visits abroad by UK residents? Paragraph 2l travel from the UK? Synonymsl UK visitors / travelers / tourists? it / theyl The visits increased from 1979 to 1999. In particular, they increased most quickly from 1985 to 1988. ◆ (2) Verbs? increase : decrease / rise : fall? go up : e down? climb : slide? ascend : decline? rocket : collapse? Tense? increased? increase? is expected / predicted to increase◆ (3) Adverbs? sharply / rapidly / swiftly? slowly / gradually / tardily? greatly / vastly / considerably? slightly / marginally / minutely◆ (4) Numbers? about / around / roughly / more or less? from about 12 to 53 million◆ (5) Time? from 1979 to 1999? between 1979 and 1999l during the 20 years / two decadesl starting from 1979★Chart 1 (Band )u According to the line chart, visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 million from 1979 to 1999. While, overseas travelers to Britain went up from about 10 to 27 million. It is obvious that UK tourists were more and climbed faster than overseas ones during the period.★Basic Structure 2There was a sharp increase in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999. (3) (2) (1) (4) (5)★Basic Structure 3A sharp increase was seen in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999. (3) (2) (6) (1) (4) (5)A sharp increase (2) amp。 (1), (6)? a sharp / slow / great / slight increase? an upward / rising / increasing tendency? a downward / falling / decreasing trend? show / prove / witness★(2) Verbu keep / remain? unchanged / constant / stableu fluctuate? upward / downwardu double / triple / quadruple★Chart 1? According to the line chart, both UK tourists abroad and overseas ones to the UK went up from 1979 to 1999 and the former climbed more markedly than the latter. In 1979, UK visitors were only around 2 million more than their overseas counterparts, being approximately 12 and 10 million respectively. However, two decades later, they almost doubled the foreign travelers to Britain (roughly 53 and 27 million separately).★Chart 2 (Band )? The bar graph demonstrates that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were and million. Also, many British travelers were attracted by the USA( million), Greece( million) and Turkey( million).? The bar graph demonstrates that France and Spain were the favorite countries for UK tourists in 1999, which attracted around and million UK visitors respectively. Remotely following were the USA, Greece and Turkey with , and million travelers separately.★Comparison (band )What is also worth mentioning is that almost 40% UK tourists selected France and Spain in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.? What is also worth mentioning is that France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.檢查★Checku Sample Answer (I4 168)? Script? Comment – Script Correspondingu Model Answer (I4 169)TEST 4．WRITING TASKSAMPLE ANSWERThis is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5 score. Here is the examiner39。s ment:The response is underlength (138words).The candidate reports the key information in the first graph . that visits to and from the UK increased and that the increase in visits from Ukwas more marked than that of visits to the country. In the bar chart the information is also reported accurately. However, the references to ＆dollar are confusing, suggesting that the candidate has not fully understood the information given, and there is little attempt to relate the two diagrams or to make parisons across the information given.There is a brief introduction to the topic, with an attempt to paraphrase the rubric: the overall structure of the writing is clear, with some use of basic discourse makers. There is very little use of reference, however, resulting in a considerable amount of repetition of key vocabulary. There is a fairly narrow range of sentence types and errors occur in verb formation and in the use of tense.Professional English? 經(jīng)濟學(xué)人 ? 衛(wèi)報? 財經(jīng)時報? 美國國家廣播公司? 華爾街? the street TV例題解析：（線圖和餅狀圖）Cambridge IELTS 4 P54 Text2 Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in
winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English
home.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
parisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.demand 需求 used / need / requirement / consumption
typical 典型 average / representative
use 使用，消耗 consume
home 家庭 household / family
passive voice amp。 pound sentence寫作：★Introductionu The curve chart reveals electricity used in England during average days in winter and summer and how electricity is consumed in a typical English household is indicated in the pie graph.★Read Chart 1? Unit? hrs / yrs? o’clock : am, . AM, ? Number? 38,000 units★Read Chart 2? Everyday words? kettle 電熱水壺? microwave oven 微波爐? range hood 抽油煙機★Plan? Winter summer? Numbers : Max amp。 Min / Average? Winter, Summer :? Numbers : Max amp。 MinWords? peak / summit / highest point 峰值? nadir / touch the bottom / lowest point 谷值? unchanged / constant / stable / stationary phase 保持不變★Chart 1 (Band )According to the curve chart, daily electricity need is higher in winter (38,000 units on average) than in summer (18,000 units on average). In winter, electricity consumption peaks at 2:00 am and 10:00 pm while it touches the bottom at 0:00 am and 8:00 am. On the other hand, in summer, it summits at 2: