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:” you can try to laugh, then you will feel well”. After class, I went to the playground to laugh, I felt very well. (楊)29. For example, I failed in my exam. I felt very sad. Then my teacher told me that laughter could make me happier and happier. So I have tried to laugh more than before, I found that it is really a good way to make us happy. (嘉琪)30. Long long ago, I had a friend. He was bad in his study, so he was sad all the day and his study became poorer. One day , a teacher found him told him sth and let him laugh aloud, then he did it. And his pressure was dropped off. Of course, at the same time, his study became better and better. (超彭)31. For example, my aunt had cancer. I thought she would be unhappy, because the doctor said that my aunt could only live for six months. However, my aunt was never unhappy. Besides, I often heard the laughter of my aunt, so we were so happy. Nowadays, my aunt is still living a happy life. (健進(jìn))2010年杏中體音美英語作文集二主題:a harmonious society首先要表揚(yáng)的同學(xué)有:大老楊,謝嘉宏,黎楚瑤,陳潔穎,麥家倫,林利珍,麥秀敏,詠欣,培意,嘉琪,智維,志賢,周芷,關(guān)杰豪,梁智杰,梁偉宏其中模板用得很規(guī)范的有麥秀敏,陳潔穎,關(guān)杰豪,麥家倫,志賢,智維,詠欣,嘉琪,大老楊。詠欣,大老楊得分最高,分別為17和19分。運(yùn)用的例子有:1. 上學(xué)路上車壞了,遇到好心人幫忙。2. 四川地震的捐款情況3. 一次生病了,在等bus時(shí)遇到好心人,并被送到醫(yī)院。4. 一次乘taxi的過程中,手機(jī)遺忘在車上,司機(jī)好心相告。5. 乘坐bus時(shí)看見年輕人讓坐。不足之處:審題不當(dāng)。當(dāng)學(xué)生受到了表揚(yáng),第二次的寫作熱情與第一次有了明顯的進(jìn)步。因?yàn)楫?dāng)時(shí)的輔導(dǎo)時(shí)間距離高考只有一個(gè)多月的時(shí)間,所以為了促進(jìn)學(xué)生在短期內(nèi)寫好作文,我還進(jìn)行了一次作文競賽。并分三等獎。凡是能寫完作文的同學(xué)都有一個(gè)雪糕作獎勵。自從作文競賽后,學(xué)生的作文水平得到了很大的提高。從廣二模的結(jié)果可以看出。四.總結(jié)體音美學(xué)生在堂上訓(xùn)練作文的次數(shù)只有5次。但從高考的成績來看,收效是可觀的。而且,寫作文也可以變成一種樂趣。只要找到了適合學(xué)生的方法,難事也是迎刃而解的