【正文】 cultural knowledge and fine taste to truly understand and appreciate. ? But doing sports or exercises is much easier and therefore much more popular among the general public. Anyone can easily find a particular type of exercise that fits his/her physical condition and age. ? 1. topic sentence ? 2. 觀點(diǎn) 1 ? 3. 觀點(diǎn) 1的缺陷 ? 4. 轉(zhuǎn)折，與觀點(diǎn) 1對(duì)比的觀點(diǎn) 2 ? 5. 觀點(diǎn) 2優(yōu)于觀點(diǎn) 1的地方 ? ? 注意對(duì)比 ? All of us have had— and will continue to have— difficult experiences and failures. It’s up to us to learn from them. One person who loses a job may bee depressed, then withdraw, and finally start to blame others for his or her problems. ? In sharp contrast, another person who does not make excuses for failures may try to identify his or her own weaknesses, choose to go back to school or go to a refresher course, switch to another career path that is better suited to his or her potential, or relocate to a more prosperous area. Even though these two people have had the same failure, they will end up getting vastly different results. ? 1. topic sentence ? 1的問題和細(xì)節(jié) ? 1相反的觀點(diǎn) 2 ? 4. 觀點(diǎn) 2針對(duì)觀點(diǎn) 1的解決辦法 ? ? When Bill Gates first started Microsoft he had a vision that the personal puter would change the face of technology. It was a unique idea which no other person had ever imagined before. Many believed he was crazy, laughing at the thought of humans spending so much time and energy in front of an electronic device. Others could not understand exactly what the purpose of a puter was. This was precisely why Gates found the idea so pelling. ? If he had tried to be like others, Gates would never have dropped out of school to start his pany. He would have followed the more mon path and the results would have been much more mediocre ? 事例的對(duì)比 ? 1. topic sentence ? 2. 舉例 ? 3. 給例子的細(xì)節(jié) ? 4. 例子遇到的困難 ? 5. 如何克服的困難 (取得的成就 ) ? 6. 假設(shè)例子沒有發(fā)生 ? 7. 假設(shè)的結(jié)果 ? 8. 總結(jié) ? Nokia和 Apple ? 幾年前， Nokia風(fēng)頭正勁 ,卻忽視了創(chuàng)新的重要性 ? 風(fēng)頭正勁 : dominate。 consumers ? 忽視 (思考為什么會(huì)忽視 ) ? 對(duì)比：在 Jobs的帶領(lǐng)下， Apple做了什么？(design, software, convenience for consumers) ? 現(xiàn)在， iphone已經(jīng)成為 大眾新寵 ，徹底的改變了手機(jī)市場(chǎng)的格局 ? 大眾新寵 : 60% of the students in my class have a iphone ? Close friends have numerous benefits. ? For one thing, loyal friends are always there to support each other, no matter what happens. Some friendships last many years and bee deeper and more meaningful with time. ? Also, people can be themselves with friends. No one has to worry about not being perfect when he or she is among friends. ? Finally, nothing can be more satisfying than the intimate conversations that true friends can have. They can confide in and trust each other ? 并列法可以是段落之間的并列，也可以是段落內(nèi)部的并列 ? 1段 . 總論點(diǎn) ? 2段 . 分論點(diǎn) 1： ? 1)A方面 ? 2)B方面 ? 3)C方面 ? 3段 . 分輪點(diǎn) 2： ? 4段 . 分論點(diǎn) 3： ? 要不要留學(xué)？ ? 1. 在知識(shí)學(xué)習(xí)方面 (1)學(xué)習(xí)外國的先進(jìn)文化知識(shí)； (2)更容易掌握外語； ? (1)結(jié)識(shí)不同國家的朋友 (2)領(lǐng)略不同文化的特點(diǎn)和魅力 (3)完善自身的性格修養(yǎng)，培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立的意識(shí)和精神 ? 遞進(jìn) ? To begin with, many people enjoy participating in sports for recreation because it offers an opportunity to be part of a group. As a participant, you can join a team and enjoy all the benefits of membership, from shared experiences to a sense of belonging. Moreover, in training for a sport, an exercise routine contributes to your health. ? 遞進(jìn) ? Probably even more important than group identity and good health are the life lessons that participation in a sport provides. Setting a goal and working towards it, collaborating with others and putting a plan into action are all good lessons that can be learned on the playing field ? 遞進(jìn) ? The primary reason is..../The principal factor is..../The main concern is...../The most significant reason why......is that........ ? more exactly/precisely。 specifically ? moreover/ furthermore/ what’s more... ? Aside from...../Besides,.... /In addition,.... ? 論證通常位于例子之后，不超過三句，相當(dāng)于是對(duì)剛剛敘述過的例子的一個(gè)點(diǎn)評(píng)，對(duì)主題句觀點(diǎn)的一個(gè)呼應(yīng) ? 論證是不能缺少，但也不宜過多 ? 論證讓你的文章更有邏輯，更有層次，更有 feel ? Agree or Disagree或是 Contrast two views ?別忘了提到你不同意的觀點(diǎn) ? 抒發(fā)感嘆，增強(qiáng)段落的感染力和說服力 ? Is conscience a more powerful motivator than money, fame, or power? ? Therefore, we shouldn’t let our conscience be eaten away by the lust for money, fame and power. We shouldn’t allow those worldly possessions to blind our eyes and deceive our mind. Follow your heart. Follow your true self. Follow the voice in your soul, because it will direct you to the only right destination you should go. ? 探討意義，升華論點(diǎn)的高度 ? Galileo’s experiments and discoveries violently challenged the theory of Aristotle and started a revolutionary debate among scientists. More importantly, he corrected thousands of people’s wrong beliefs and contributed a lot to the modern physics. ? 有且只有一個(gè)要求：呼應(yīng) ? 既要和開頭呼應(yīng)，也要和 Body部分呼應(yīng) ? To summarize。 In conclusion。 Finally。 In the end。 ? In a modern society that values instant and automatic, patience has a place. It is virtuous。 it guides you to take the right action in the right moment. Use it to weigh important decisions in your personal life. Make prudent business and investment decisions and save money. Win championships! ? 單詞層面 ? 1. 單詞的準(zhǔn)度 ? decide to do / make up one’s mind to do ? 2. 學(xué)習(xí)新的單詞和新的用法 ? 3. 養(yǎng)成若干好習(xí)慣 ? 1)形容詞 /副詞 ? 2)同位語 ? 3)并列結(jié)構(gòu) ? 4)從句 ? The decision is unreasonable ? 5. 練習(xí)不同詞性之間單詞的相互轉(zhuǎn)換 ? 1. 名詞和動(dòng)詞的轉(zhuǎn)換 ? value, mature, favor, expect ? 2. 動(dòng)詞和形容詞 ? ignore, believe ? 句式層面 ? 1. 簡單句和復(fù)合句 ? 2. 修飾語：定語從句，后置定語，句子 ? the money ? 3. 分詞做狀語 ? Believing that money ? 4. 反問句 ? 5. 并列結(jié)構(gòu) (排比 ) ?