[考研英語(yǔ)]考研英語(yǔ)短文寫作09年真題分析含評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)-資料下載頁(yè)
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【正文】 ck me that if nothing is done to solve the social phenomenon, its effect will be soon shown, which inevitably affects the development of the harmonious society. So we should regard the trend rightly. We also should take it into our accounts strictly. We should use the Net more reasonably. On no account should we make the people longer by the puter. Only in this way can we have a good generation foreseen. And a more harmonious society can be built up. 評(píng)語(yǔ)：文章較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，內(nèi)容比較完整，既描述了漫畫又揭示了隱含的意思，使用了比較豐富的句型結(jié)構(gòu)和詞語(yǔ)，使用了一定的連接手段，語(yǔ)言基本通順，文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次清晰，易于理解，但是有一定數(shù)量的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 考研英語(yǔ)寫作 8 第三檔 ： 11 分 As the picture vividly depict that inter like a connect different people in the world. You can municate with your friends. No matter where they live in, the distance no longer an obstacle in our munication. The picture reflect a thoughtprovoking social phenomenon that people in a mounting numbers use inter shopping, work, study and chatting with friends in order to meet each other face and face. There are somewhat reasonable, but you weighing in mind, you can find that distance between our spirit longer than before. On the Inter we can not know each other very well, because some people don’t use their real name, even tell lies on inter. On the conterary, if we meet each other face and face, it’s better for munication. Inter make the obstacle of distance vanished, benefit us a lot, we can chating with our friends who live in a city that far from us. However, we should take that serious inter make the distance of our spirit longer than before, inter is a doubleedge sword. 評(píng)語(yǔ)：該文包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯基本能夠滿足任務(wù)要求；有一些嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)法與用詞錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解；內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰。但是第三部分主要是對(duì)第二部分的總結(jié)，評(píng)論簡(jiǎn)單。 第二檔 ： 7分 As can be seen from the picture, many people are sitting in the front of a puters, who are basing in typing on the keyboard, but they don’t immediate municate with each other though they live near. It looks like a bit pot, everyone has its space, and the puter is necessary for them. It goes without saying that this picture aims at reavling a mon phenomenon in our daily life, that is inter brings conviences to us, also brings the distance for each other. Nowadays, we must believe that our development can not leave the using of inter. We do any things through the puter instead of saying “hello” to our families or colleagues face to face. In my opinion, we must realize the importance of the inter and also pay more attentions to municate with each other face to face. Do not make the puter make a distant between us. 評(píng)語(yǔ)：該文遺漏題目要點(diǎn)，評(píng)論不夠恰當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，有些句子內(nèi)容表達(dá)不清晰，字?jǐn)?shù)不夠。 第一檔 ： 3分 Largely through the influence of many people from different points of the world. The old, the young and the student, they use the puters to constant with another body. Some people use puter to leare new knowledge, such as the students. Some people use the puter to help them to plete their work. Such as the tank workers. While some people use the puter to play games. For example, some old person like to play game on puter. Many people on puter is on Monday to Friday. But the player people is everyday more or less. So the world is like a family. Since the puter with us is to enable our to share in a mon life we cannot help considering whether or not we are forming the powers of the life’s happy. 評(píng)語(yǔ)：該文明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，不能反映需要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)法與用詞錯(cuò)誤很多，妨礙理解，作者的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力差；字?jǐn)?shù)不夠。
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