【正文】 你應(yīng)該提出一些解決的措施，所以這封信里面要講 的話 一點(diǎn)都不難 寫 ，最重要的是我們 要 做一個(gè)對(duì)社會(huì)有責(zé)任的人，因?yàn)橹挥腥绱宋覀儾拍軌蛴梦覀兊男娜ジ兄@個(gè)社會(huì)的問題，才能真正從我們內(nèi)心想出一些方法，使我們的社會(huì)更加潔凈，這樣才能更加和諧。如 何解決這一問題成為 近年來很多人關(guān)心的話題。 我真誠地希望您能認(rèn)真對(duì)待我的信。 第一段開門見山，使用 draw your attention to結(jié)構(gòu)直接表示 請(qǐng)求關(guān)注 。 本段 中，動(dòng)詞 address和 lodge較有特色。 2．所使用 的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯比較豐富。 考研英語寫作 3 四檔 ： 78分 Dear Editor Wang, I am a senior student living in Beijing. Being a citizen in our capital, I care a lot about our environment. But, although the law of not using plastic bags had been enforced since June, the effect is not very good. I am afraid “White Pollution” will still exist for a long time. I believe there are ways to improve the situation. Our munities could offer bags free, which will substitute plastic bags. Meanwhile, some education on environment and White pollution should be held to local people. Besides the above two, much more can be done. I hope you would consider it carefully. Yours truly Li Ming 評(píng)語：較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，基本能夠?qū)δ繕?biāo)讀者產(chǎn)生預(yù)期的效果： 1. 包含了所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，既簡(jiǎn)要介紹了自己的觀點(diǎn)，又提出了具體的建議。 5. 格式和語域比較恰當(dāng)。 4. 格式和語域基本合理。 3．雖然也使用了一些銜接手段，但是內(nèi)容上缺乏連貫性。 2．作者基本不具備英語的語法常識(shí)，句子結(jié)構(gòu)簡(jiǎn)單且不完整。圖畫中的中文提示詞為：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的“遠(yuǎn)與近”。題目圖片看似簡(jiǎn)單，實(shí)則抽象。 在創(chuàng)作中，首段需要描述圖畫。 第二步，需要點(diǎn)出圖畫寓意，其實(shí)就是讓我們分析 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)“遠(yuǎn)”和“ 近”?；ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)使人們 都變成了 宅男宅女 的 蝸居人 ， 只有辦公室是工作 場(chǎng)所 ， 除此以外，無處可去。 三．參考范文 As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that many people， old and young, men and women, in front of a puter and using the inter. The caption in the drawing reads: “ the Inter: near or far” . 如上圖所示，我們能看到很多人，老的少的，男人 女人，都坐在電腦前用上互聯(lián)網(wǎng)。我們能用電郵， ， MSN，或者 ICQ等軟件實(shí)現(xiàn)實(shí)時(shí)溝通。一些家長(zhǎng)甚至在抱怨他們和孩子談話的時(shí)間越來越少了。只有這樣我們才能生活在一個(gè)更加和諧的社會(huì)。 第二段要求闡釋漫畫 蘊(yùn)含 的深刻社會(huì)意義。 解釋完圖畫意義，第三段 應(yīng) 是 進(jìn)行 議論 。 考研英語寫作 7 五．閱卷樣文 第五檔 ： 19分 As illustrated in the cartoon, each person sits in their own work room. In front of them is a puter. Everyone looks at the screen carefully, and municate with their colleagues through the instead of talking face to face. Their work places are placed like a . And below the cartoon, there is a topic which says: the near and far among the Inter. From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of puters, people from all over the world bee nearer by using the inter to municate with each other. Meanwhile, people also bee far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the inter brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the instead of going to a bookstore. Besides, we can municate with our friends on the without going out of home. But we can’t ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family bees less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them. To my best understanding, we should use the to municate with each other in a proper way. It is just a tool when we really need it to serve us. If we want to keep our friendship more effectively, we should spend more time with them in our real life. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the munication tool on the but also make our friendship stronger. 評(píng)語：該文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，內(nèi)容 完整，既清楚描述了漫畫內(nèi)容又指出了其隱含的意思。但是第三部分主要是對(duì)第二部分的總結(jié)，