【正文】 r daily lives. We can achieve an immediate munication via Email, , MSN or ICQ. According to a recent survey conducted by Li Ming, a sociologist in Peking University, approximately 400,000,000 people use inter in China in 2022. On the other hand, others argue that inter makes relationship of people weak. We can often read many stories about children spending too much time on online games. Some parents even plain that they have fewer and fewer time chatting with their children. 這幅圖片的目的是向我們表明作為溝通工具的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)有其優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。這樣 我們的身體 就會(huì)垮下， 而 人是需要運(yùn)動(dòng)的 ，所以它 對(duì)人們身體 也會(huì)造成傷害和 束縛 。任何事物都有兩方面。第一眼看到的是什么 ？ 我們看到一個(gè)大圓圈，里面分成若干個(gè)小部分，每個(gè)部分里面有一個(gè)人在電腦前 忙活。揭示主題需結(jié)合中文提示 “網(wǎng)絡(luò)的近與遠(yuǎn) ”，即網(wǎng)絡(luò)為人們的生活帶來(lái)的便利以及不便。 寫好這篇作文主要在于兩點(diǎn)：第一，描述圖畫。 3．用詞錯(cuò)誤太多，詞不達(dá)意。 4．格式和語(yǔ)域不恰當(dāng)。 考研英語(yǔ)寫作 4 二檔 ： 34分 I am very sorry to trouble with you. But this is a problem annoying with me. It is White Pollution. With the economic growth widely, white pollution bee more and more serious. It is harmonious between the men and nature. White pollution destroy some special. More and more similar issue can be read today in newspaper as well as in magazine. The problem can be solved in some ways. First, attitude is everything. We must make people aware of this issue. Second, we must change with ourself. It’s essential that we address our problem before looking to others change. Finally, the acts of pollution must be punishment. I’m looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely Li Ming 評(píng)語(yǔ) ：未能按照要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，不能清楚地將信息傳達(dá)給讀者。 三檔 ： 56分 To whom it may concern: As a student of a university, I want to take this opportunity to express some points about “White Pollution”. There is no denying that plastic is destroy our environment is we use it excessively. So the government take some means to deal with it. Restrict to use the plastic bags in whole country. But it didn’t get successful as we predict. The “White Pollution” is still around our environment in some regions. Takes measures is needed. I want to take some remends. First and formost, more strength restriction is needed by pollution education. Second, media should spread more information concern. Only in this way can we curb the statement. I’m looking forward your reply. Sincerely yours Liming 評(píng)語(yǔ)：基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，對(duì)目標(biāo)讀者基本產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果： 1. 內(nèi)容包含試題所要求的兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，沒(méi)有跑題。 2. 所使用的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯相對(duì)比較豐富，例如： Being a citizen in……, I care…… 等。 3．語(yǔ)言比較自然流暢，盡管存在個(gè)別的語(yǔ)法（例如，時(shí)態(tài)）和用詞錯(cuò)誤。 第三段中，作者 再次 請(qǐng)求關(guān)注 。首段 使用了 and連 接 兩個(gè)并列句的 信息。感謝您撥冗 關(guān)注。 為了解決這一問(wèn)題，我想 提如下的建議。 本文可以按三 段 處理，首段直接 談白色污染的 情況，中段講出解決問(wèn)題的建議和措施，最后再次 提醒編輯關(guān)注此事刻不容緩，并 加強(qiáng) 禮貌語(yǔ)氣。 二．框架思路 確切地講 ，今年的 小作文仍然是沒(méi)有脫離開(kāi)過(guò)去的老套，又是一封信，而這封信對(duì)同學(xué)們來(lái)講， 是我們很熟悉的 白色塑料袋的使用問(wèn)題 。 今年 的 建議信 相比 07 年 的 建議信要求更加具體，且話題更為熟悉?？佳杏⒄Z(yǔ)短文寫作十年真題分析 第十節(jié) 2022年 Section III Writing 2022年 考研英語(yǔ)考試 結(jié)束了。 Part A 51. Directions: Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White pollution” is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to 1) give your opinions briefly and 2) make two or three suggestions You should write about 100 word. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points) 一．審題構(gòu)思 小作文去年考的道歉信， 09 年小作文要求寫一封建議信 。 如果同學(xué)在考前臨陣抱佛腳，只要把建議信的套話背下來(lái) ，比如建議信的第一句話怎么寫，中間怎么寫，最后一句怎么結(jié)尾，直接把 有關(guān) 內(nèi)容換成白色污染即可。 談到了白色污染這個(gè)話題， 就想 給 編輯寫 封 信 ， 信中 反映的是你對(duì)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象的一個(gè)看法，之后，