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【正文】 She thought she could improve in her writing. And she did. ?句首盡量少用 “ there is” 句型。 ?盡量少用動詞的被動語態(tài) ?盡量使用行為動詞， 避免用 to be 動詞 ? Poor: She went past my desk. ? Better: she sidled past my desk. ? Poor: She is particular about food. ? Better: She pares prices and quality of food. ?慎用形容詞 ? When you catch an adjective, kill it. by Mark twin ?一個主語只做一件事。 ? The writer lived in Smith Hall and wrote her first paper about the war. ?避免使用 this 代詞， 除非你和讀者都知道指的是什么。 ?句子長短搭配要適宜。 One sentence in every ten will have fewer than ten words. ? 句首和句尾要強而有力。 ? Poor: However, she did not pass the course. ? Better: She did not, however, pass the course. ? Poor: Good writing is hard work, in my opinion. ? Better: Good writing is, in my opinion, hard work. ?避免常用詞的生僻用法 ?去除贅詞 (unnecessary) ? Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk. ? Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk. ? At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who dislike change, the Minister of Transport, Mrs. Castle, speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders, expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled. Corrected: ? At the end of a rousing speech delivered at a meeting of trade union leaders, the Minister of Transport, Mrs. Castle, expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled. The speech on government policies which she said were designed to, in spite of the opposition of those who dislike change, stimulate the economy. ?羊群正在草地上安靜地吃草，沒有注意到狼正向它們逼近。 ? The goats grazed peacefully in the pasture and were unaware of the approaching wolf. ? Grazing peacefully, the goats in the pasture were unaware of the approaching wolf. ? In the pasture, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching wolf. ? There were goats grazing peacefully in the pasture, unaware of the approaching wolf. ? As the goats grazed peacefully in the pasture, they were unaware of the approaching wolf. For appreciation ? In the most general sense, one could consider growth to be inclusive when every member of society participates in and benefits from it on an equitable basis. ? Critically, policies for inclusive growth should distinguish between two types of inequality. ? Accordingly, inclusive growth can be defined as economic growth coupled with equality of opportunity. ? Carefully designed redistributive policy should also be part of an inclusive growth strategy for China, the purpose being not simply to equalize ines, but to promote equal access to opportunity so as to improve ine distribution. ? Not surprisingly, the Chinese government has harshly criticized the award, claiming that the Nobel mittee unlawfully interfered with its internal affairs and humiliated it in the eyes of the international public. On the contrary, China should be proud that it has bee powerful enough to be the subject of debate and criticism.
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