【正文】 ame the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us. At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world. 巧妙使用定從句，提升了文章檔次：Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding. 使用非，使句子表達(dá)更：On arriving at the tea house? I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. 使用倒裝句突出重點(diǎn)。
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. 使用 it做形式主語(yǔ)，使表達(dá)更地道。
It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. 六、 2021 年江蘇卷 試題回顧 書面表達(dá) ( 滿分 25 分) 請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇150 詞左右的文章。
1. 用約 30 個(gè)詞概括上述利用排名 ( ratings)實(shí)行消費(fèi)的現(xiàn)象；，然后用 23 個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。
；； 內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。
今年作文仍然是讀寫作文，即先用 30 詞概括閱讀材料，然后針對(duì) 材料中的話題寫一篇議文章談看法。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀兩段相關(guān)消費(fèi)排名 現(xiàn)象及觀點(diǎn)的純文字材料，然后實(shí)行比較和分析，表明態(tài)度，作出價(jià)值 判斷。
文章首段要簡(jiǎn)要介紹兩段材料，第一段材料為一對(duì)* 買旅行箱看了網(wǎng)上的評(píng)論，結(jié)果買回來(lái)的旅行箱質(zhì)量很好。第二段材料為一幫人 去餐館吃飯，看了online rating，結(jié)果飯菜很不好吃，從而凸顯出online rating的不靠譜。
然后寫你對(duì) online rating 的看法，表明觀點(diǎn)，注意用23 個(gè)論據(jù)來(lái)支撐自己的看法。
文章屬于議文章，要注意主題句的使用，論點(diǎn)之間要注意有條理。
文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三人稱來(lái)寫。
Possible version one：As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers. There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend pletely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings. Possible version two：Nowadays, most modities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers＇ purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory. There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others ’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment es from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others＇ advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the oute of a careful manipulation of panies or sellers. It has bee a mon practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales. Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

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