二輪英語讀后續(xù)寫專題06-讀后續(xù)寫速成：“五點(diǎn)爆破”法-學(xué)案-資料下載頁
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【正文】 uggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. To her great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged heryellow blouseand spared no effort to yell so as to attract others39。attention. Fortunately, she was eventually noticed and brought into thehelicopter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything. Besides, they agreed never to quarrel again, determining to live the life to the fullest.【解析】首先，在邏輯上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，內(nèi)心充滿了悔恨，在面對(duì)困難時(shí)焦慮、畏懼；之后，主人公努力求生，最終獲救，并且領(lǐng)悟到了一定的人生道理?？v觀整個(gè)故事，情節(jié)發(fā)展不僅符合兩段給出的開頭所限定的情景要求，而且還設(shè)置了一定的懸念，增強(qiáng)了故事的可讀性。文章第一句 an absolute darkness ruled the forest 中， rule 一詞就使用了擬人的修辭手法，讓森林陰森黑暗的一面展露無遺，同時(shí)描繪出主人公身處絕境的緊迫性。在 Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse… 一句中，直接將情緒形容詞放在句首，使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞的語法，表達(dá)精練。此外， There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. 一句中，使用了幾個(gè)短句，卻包含了兩處非謂語動(dòng)詞語法，同時(shí)活用了 wear 一詞，把兩個(gè)人相見時(shí)的場(chǎng)景生動(dòng)地描繪了出來?！驹~匯拓展】1） 表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or ，Not only … but also2） 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, yet, however , although , though …3） 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
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