二輪英語讀后續(xù)寫專題06-讀后續(xù)寫速成：“五點(diǎn)爆破”法-學(xué)案(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 是如何熬過這個(gè)夜晚的？1. How did Jane feel then?2. How did Jane struggle through the night?3. Did she fall asleep and what did she think of?It was daybreak when Jane woke up?(切入點(diǎn)）昨晚Jane 沒有被救，今天會(huì)發(fā)生什么？1. Was Jane rescued and who rescued Jane?2. How was she rescued and how did she feel then?續(xù)寫內(nèi)容Jane是如何熬過那一夜晚的Jane是如何獲救的STEP4 亮點(diǎn)：刻畫細(xì)節(jié)沖突,優(yōu)美連表達(dá) 刻畫細(xì)節(jié)沖突添加細(xì)節(jié)Jane在當(dāng)晚和次日的動(dòng)作，語言，心理描寫以及對(duì)周圍環(huán)境的描寫。營造沖突1. 擴(kuò)大Jane在夜晚內(nèi)心的沖突（后悔與丈夫吵架）2. 渲染Jane當(dāng)晚與次日與環(huán)境之間的沖突（當(dāng)晚’’惡劣’’環(huán)境與內(nèi)心無助和恐懼的沖突；次日讓直升機(jī)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的困難與渴望被救的沖突）優(yōu)美連貫表達(dá)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark the dreadful darkness,①____________________________________________________________________(一切都像準(zhǔn)備好發(fā)動(dòng)攻擊的野獸）[明喻+過去分詞作定語]②_______________________________(又累又怕）[雙形容詞作狀語]，Jane was rooted to spot,unable to utter a word.’’③____________________________________________________(如果我沒有和湯姆吵架，我現(xiàn)在就不會(huì)被困在這里了）[虛擬語氣]，”She thought of herself④__________________________________________________(后悔的淚水模糊了她的眼睛）[with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)].⑤________________________________(被恐懼包圍著）[過去分詞作狀語]，Jane abandoned herself to despair and fell asleep.“Tom,is that you?”She murmured.“Tom,help!”In her dream,⑥_____________________________________(她看見一位男士張開雙臂）[現(xiàn)在分詞作賓補(bǔ)]towards her at a distance.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.⑦_(dá)_________________________(盡管很沮喪）[省略結(jié)構(gòu)]，Jane decided to c
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