二輪英語讀后續(xù)寫專題06-讀后續(xù)寫速成：“五點(diǎn)爆破”法-學(xué)案(已改無錯(cuò)字)
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【正文】 ontinue forcing her way ,she found it hard to find a way out,⑧____________________________________________(這再次讓她絕望）[定語從句].Fortunately,a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment.⑨__________________________________________________(Jane太激動(dòng)了，她立刻沖到巖石邊）[倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)]and climbed onto it eagerly.⑩______________________________________（眼里閃耀著希望的光芒）[獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)]，she waved her yellow blouse madly to the helicopter,(11)_________________________________(大聲呼救）[現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語].To her great joy,the helicopter spotted her and came to her help.(12)______________________________________（當(dāng)團(tuán)聚的時(shí)候）[省略結(jié)構(gòu)]，Jane and her husband hugged each other tightly in the warmth light of the rising sun.STEP5基本點(diǎn)：做到首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整合理提升點(diǎn)：為了做到首尾呼應(yīng)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加完整，考生可以在第二段的結(jié)尾回扣文章開頭Jane與丈夫的爭(zhēng)吵和沖突，充分體現(xiàn)本次經(jīng)歷后二人的感受。優(yōu)秀范文But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her familyat a distance.All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn39。t help crying, Hadn39。t I quarreled with Tom, walked away andclimbedto the high place, I wouldn39。t be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying. She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.It was daybreak whenJanewoke up. Weak as she was, she str
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