【正文】 d me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹失敗的經(jīng)歷，及從中的收獲和感想。描述經(jīng)歷用過去時(shí)態(tài)。2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇短文條理通暢，能將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)完整。句式豐富，能運(yùn)用連詞使文章更有邏輯同時(shí)運(yùn)用了大量的短語。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語和連詞的使用：be full of ，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!7．緊張而又忙碌的初中生活即將結(jié)束，在裝載你收獲的行囊成長(zhǎng)記錄袋中還應(yīng)增添一份你自己滿意的答案。根據(jù)上述提示，請(qǐng)以“My Unforgettable Junior High School Life”為題寫一篇文章，記錄你難忘的校園生活。首句已給出。注意：. ，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名或能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的相關(guān)信息。，信件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。My Unforgettable Junior High School LifeHow time flies! 【答案】How time flies! My colorful junior high school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think of about myself.In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them. I got on well with my classmates. I was good at English. I liked playing basketball / football / volleyball. But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll learn to enjoy my school life. I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文要求我們以My Unforgettable Junior High School Life為題，回想一下自己即將過去的初中，講述難忘的初中生活。題目中用思維導(dǎo)圖，列出了一些文章中會(huì)用到的關(guān)鍵詞，供學(xué)生們參考使用。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)、第一人稱為主來敘述。題目中并沒有給出具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想象力，可以從自己的學(xué)習(xí)、愛好、與同學(xué)的交往、與老師的相處以及自己的感受等方面進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要展開合理想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，注意各部分內(nèi)容之間的層次，內(nèi)容要完整、充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰。其次應(yīng)注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯。句子的結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句及其他復(fù)雜句式。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并描述了自己的感受。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，符合題目要求。短文中作者從自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況、與同學(xué)的交往、愛好、特長(zhǎng)等方面進(jìn)行了總結(jié)，在最后提出了對(duì)未來的希望。層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章第一段引出主題，使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；第二段回憶過去的生活，主要使用了一般過去時(shí)；最后對(duì)未來提出希望，用到了一般將來時(shí)。語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了名詞、動(dòng)詞、形容詞等的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句句型，調(diào)整了文章節(jié)奏，提升了作文檔次。短文中較好的句型有：In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them、But now I am interested in history, because it is very interesting、In this way, I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.、I’ll make it more and more beautiful. Believing myself is the key to success等等。8．書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè)，一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵(lì)過你。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文，將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來。要求：(1)將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整，80詞左右；(2) 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3) 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題，寫一篇短文，感謝我的老師?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I39。d like to……，When she found……，She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐，接下來介紹她對(duì)我的幫助，最后表示從老師那里得到的愛和支持將永遠(yuǎn)和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．書面表達(dá)近日，你校迎來一批來自英國(guó)的交流生，學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國(guó)交流生介紹中國(guó)的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會(huì)友，饋贈(zèng)親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……(自擬兩點(diǎn))。注意:，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。中國(guó)有很多種茶。它們中的每一個(gè)都有自己的特點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)中國(guó)人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國(guó)人了解中國(guó)，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。