【正文】 harity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I39。m glad……，we can……，It’s OK to……，If your parents don’t allow you to…….，you should……，I hope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。12．C解析：Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。是一篇議論文，第一段要寫贊同學生網上交友的人的觀點，第二段要寫反對學生網上交友的觀點，第三段要表述作者自己的觀點?！驹斀狻勘酒魑囊笞髡呔蜕暇W交友發(fā)表意見，寫作之前要認真閱讀所給提示，確定文章中心。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。文章要有層次、流暢?？梢赃m當發(fā)揮，寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文的緊密聯系，要符合邏輯關系?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，可以分三段寫：贊成；反對；你的看法。注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。13．E解析：Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。同學們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。【點睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。14．D解析：The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強調）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結構，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c睛】文章結構清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。15．B解析：We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊；讀走讀學校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮?？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運用適當的句型和過渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。16．D解析：Dear classmates,Summer holiday is ing, and here is my plan for it.First, I39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Earth