【正文】 beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非謂語動詞結構The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。12．C解析：　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內容，我們應將這些內容用正確的英語表達出來。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，謂語動詞用原形，特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化，這是一個寫作的難點。最后要注意英語的表達習慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。還應使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強文章的表現(xiàn)力。13．B解析：例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學生有話可說?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學校的環(huán)境。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題，結束全文?！军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強，長短句結合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。14．A解析：My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內容，學生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達需要使用正確時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。內容應主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。寫作時應注意：文章中應包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，注意應合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結構要符合英語的表達習慣，用完整的句子表達。句式結構可以簡單句為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用適當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內容完整，結構清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進行了展望。各部分內容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。語言準確、得體，表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。15．B解析：We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school）和走讀（a day school）兩類學校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊；讀走讀學校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻?，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應用文？，單一還是混合。、短語、句型。，并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點?！军c睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點要全，表達要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。16．A解析：Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in 39。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides