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________________________________________________________________________________________I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【答案】例文:Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in the Green family. The old couple have no children but two dogs, so they will have more time to municate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well. Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it’s easy for me to go around. I can also use the Wifi to keep in touch with my parents. My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds.I’m lucky to have a buddy during my stay at your school. I expect him/her to help me with my problems in my study. I can chat with him/her in English to improve my speaking skills. I love history so I want to visit some places of interest at the weekend. I’m also curious about the local food and I want to have a taste.I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用作文,郵件內(nèi)容要回答郵件中的三個(gè)問(wèn)題,可分為三個(gè)段落進(jìn)行回答。好單詞:afford 負(fù)擔(dān)得起好短語(yǔ):municate with 和……交流as well 也keep in touch with 與……保持聯(lián)系expect sb. to do sth. 期望某人做某事help sb. with sth. 在某方面幫助某人chat with 和……聊天place of interest 名勝古跡be curious about 對(duì)……感到好奇have a taste 嘗一嘗好句式:Their flat is in the centre of Sydney, so it39。s easy for me to go around. 他們的公寓在悉尼市中心,所以對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō),到處走走很容易。(It is adj. for sb. to do sth. 對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是……,it是形式主語(yǔ),不定式短語(yǔ)是真正的主語(yǔ))8.馬上就要畢業(yè)了,班里的同學(xué)都在討論應(yīng)該如何慶祝初中畢業(yè)。以下是你的三位朋友的想法和理由。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要介紹他們的打算,并談?wù)勛约邯?dú)特的想法。為父母煮一餐飯。感謝他們的付出Tom做義工。證明自己長(zhǎng)大了,有能力幫助他人Cathy舉行聚會(huì)。放松心情、開(kāi)心一下Jane…….?!璝ou注意:1.詞數(shù)在80左右。(短文的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))2.短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。行文連貫,表達(dá)清楚,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分。提示詞:義工volunteer(n.)These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our graduation. Here are some ideas from my friends.Jane plans to hold a big party with her friends to relax and have fun. Tom will cook a big meal for his parents. He wants to thank them for what they have done for him. Cathy is going to be a volunteer. She wants to show others that she has grown up and is able to help those in need.As for me, I will go traveling around with my friends. Traveling can not only enrich my knowledge but also leave me a good memory with my friends.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話(huà)題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。仔細(xì)審閱題意,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這篇短文語(yǔ)句通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。特別一些固定句型和短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用,使文章增色,例如,plan to,not only …but also…等,上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。9. Have you got anything that is branded on your memory, making you feel happy, satisfied, proud or just feel sad, terrible, and regretful? Maybe you did it, experienced it, read it, saw it or only heard of it. Please write a position with the title “The ________ thing that I have ever ________” to share your story. The following information should be included: 1. How did you get the story?2. When and where did it happen? 3. What happened exactly?4. Why is it branded on your memory? Please list at least two reasons.【答案】請(qǐng)參考范文:The happy thing that I have ever experiencedThis is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep love.I was born in a poor family,My parents live a simple I was 8 years old, I was in Grade 3 of primary school. I liked watching others play the piano. In fact, I liked the beautiful picture of playing the piano.Suddenly one day, my father took me to a nice , I learned that it was a piano training center, learning piano was very expensive, but my father helped me find a piano I learned the piano from my teacher there.Three months later, I played the piano to my father, but I did not play well. The teacher told my father that maybe I had no gift for advised my father to give my father said that if I would like to play the piano, he didn39。t give up. I was moved by my father39。s encourgement. 【解析】【詳解】本文是關(guān)于自己經(jīng)歷或看到的故事為話(huà)題的材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫(xiě)作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語(yǔ)及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫(xiě)作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫(xiě)作時(shí)還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫;,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型:This is a story of my own experience, from this thing, I really felt my father39。s love for me, warm and deep ,從這件事上,我真的感受到了爸爸對(duì)我的愛(ài),溫暖而深沉的愛(ài)。Suddenly one day, my father said to take me to a nice ,爸爸說(shuō)帶我去一個(gè)好地方。But my father said as long as I am happy on the line, it doesn39。t ,沒(méi)關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】注意寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,將要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)并表達(dá)清楚,注意使用英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)。