【正文】 】這是一篇表格式的作文，要點(diǎn)是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)，然后加以整合，也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫，但要點(diǎn)一定要全，不能漏掉。寫作時(shí)要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語的影響，要用地道的英語表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語法等問題，用好簡單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句?？梢杂靡恍└呒壴~匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。8．“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅模约盀槭裁催@樣做。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談?wù)勛约旱暮玫膶W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在寫作時(shí),要根據(jù)提出的幾個(gè)問題為中心圍繞展開，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁?. 例文點(diǎn)評：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，語言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。9．書面表達(dá)。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會的關(guān)注和教育部門的高度重視。假若你是來自九年級三班的李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語寫一份不少于80詞的倡議書。建議大家積極多參加體育活動，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請你談?wù)剬W(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。