【正文】 好細(xì)檢查，點(diǎn)滴小錯(cuò)別忽視。學(xué)生在明確目的和掌握要領(lǐng)后，要嚴(yán)格按照規(guī)定的時(shí)間去完成作文訓(xùn)練任務(wù)。最后要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無習(xí)語及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循書信格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長句?？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。7．三年快樂而充實(shí)的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進(jìn)入高中(中職)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來，你對(duì)高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請(qǐng)以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳，圖書館，運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)……)；②師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系；③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步；④補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)自己的想法。（2）文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；要點(diǎn)齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: （118 words）I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。8．你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問題。可以先把各要點(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來，然后再組合成文。寫作中注意語意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。9．書面表達(dá)。，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實(shí)際寫封回信。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2）回復(fù)須包括所有藥店，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認(rèn)識(shí)的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受?！币罂芍疚挠矛F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱是第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——介紹我進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。第二部分：文章主體——根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，依次介紹我進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個(gè)小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學(xué)習(xí)和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時(shí)間做自己喜歡的事情。用一般過去時(shí)。小節(jié)2：進(jìn)初三以來在學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)。用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。