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I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。常州市政府發(fā)文,從2019年2月1日起,市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級的同學(xué)們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長寫一封信介紹大家的觀點,同時談?wù)勛约旱南敕ār態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱。仔細(xì)閱讀所給材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,根據(jù)主題和所給要點列出提綱,所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,語句通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范。盡量使用高分句型。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點,列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。本文提綱: 大多數(shù)學(xué)生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。他們認(rèn)為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多,會造成嚴(yán)重的空氣污染。更重要的是,人們喜歡在午夜放假,外面總是那么吵,很多人睡不好覺。另外,如果人們不夠小心,可能會引起大火。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花,這對他們的眼睛很危險。如果我們不放煙花,清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。 另一方面,有些學(xué)生不同意。他們認(rèn)為中國人幾百年前就習(xí)慣放煙花了。此外,中國傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它。如果沒有煙花,人們會比以前更不感興趣。 我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該遵守這條規(guī)則,因為良好的環(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。保護(hù)環(huán)境就是保護(hù)我們自己?!军c睛】本文思路清晰,時態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,層次分明,所用句式句型比較高級,像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. / I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else.。書面表達(dá)題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力??忌荒苓z漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式,語言要規(guī)范,信息表達(dá)清晰、完整,意思連貫。要學(xué)以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。9.今年初《流浪地球》在中國火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年,講述太陽即將毀火,已經(jīng)不適合人類生存,而面對絕境,人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃,試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系,尋找人類新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如,老師問:希望是什么?班長回答:希望是我們這個年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀看后,印象深刻,給你寫了一封郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況,用英語回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意:,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon,I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式,要對來信中的問題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時在寫作時,注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩?!军c睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。