【正文】 atch……，We wele to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒?，最后歡迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。13．（山東中考模擬）“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長提建議”。你馬上就要畢業(yè)了，在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中你一定有很多收獲，請給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們提幾點(diǎn)建議吧！要求：1. 內(nèi)容完整，語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范清晰。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名，校名。100 詞左右?！敬鸢浮縄39。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短語的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。14．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)共享單車為我們的生活帶來了極大的便利。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)九年級學(xué)生李華，你的美國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國最新出現(xiàn)的一種共享單車“mobike”很感興趣，并請你做個簡要介紹。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 這種單車的使用方法（如：APP查看車輛、掃碼開鎖等）；2. 這種單車的優(yōu)勢；3. 你對這種單車的看法。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：智能手機(jī)smartphone；掃碼scan the QR code；交通工具a means of transportation。Dear Jim,I’m siting to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope to ride a mobike with you in China.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bikemobike mentioned in your latest letter.It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is being a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.Hope to ride a mobike with you in China. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹關(guān)于共享單車的一些事情。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。15．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)中考模擬）保持健康的體魄，擁有健康的生活方式對我們每個人來說都是至關(guān)重要的。假如你是李明，你們學(xué)校將開展以How to keep healthy，體育鍛煉和好的生活習(xí)慣等方面寫一篇演講稿。要求：，意思連貫，書寫工整。（姓名，校名和地名等）:不少于70詞。開頭已經(jīng)給出。不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。（請把標(biāo)題和已給出的開頭抄寫在答題卡上）HowtokeephealthyHi, Everyone, I39。mgladtogiveaspeechhere.Mytopicis Howtokeep healthy.【答案】 Hi, Everyone, I39。m glad to give a speech here. My topic is How to keep healthy. As students, we should not only study hard but also have strong and healthy bodies. So it is very important to develop a healthy living habit. And there are many things we can do in our daily life to keep healthy. First, keep doing exercise. It can help you reduce pressure and make your body strong. Jogging, walking after meals and dancing are good choice. Second, Develop a good eating habit. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit instead of junk food and sugar. Third, Enough and good sleep is good for our health. So don’t stay up late. I hope my advice can help you. Thanks for listening.【解析】本文要求以How to keep healthy為題寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容從健康飲食，體育鍛煉和好的生活習(xí)慣等方面去表達(dá)。文章時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。在提出建議時，可以使用first，second???進(jìn)行列舉，使文章顯得更加條理。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡。在提出建議時，可以使用first，second???進(jìn)行列舉，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；條理性更強(qiáng)。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。16．（北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，你打算邀請你們班交換生Peter參加下周日學(xué)校組織的志愿活動。請用英語寫一封邀請函，告訴他活動的時間和地點(diǎn)，活動內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準(zhǔn)備。提示詞語： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示問題：When and where will you go?What will you do in this activity?What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?Dear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li HuaDear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your e