【正文】 ssed when the exam es. And he doesn’t have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質的評價報告。在表格中有非常詳細的關于Tommy各方面的內容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內容有條理的表達出來。表格中涉及的內容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。這篇作文應主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應該用第一人稱。同時注意表達的準確性，尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內容。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內容完整，包含了表格中的所有內容，沒有遺漏要點。表達準確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結合，并恰當的使用了一些連詞，使文章表達的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 7．書面表達根據要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。 生活中常常會發(fā)生一些意外的事，但每個人處理事情的方式不同。有些人冷靜溫和地處理，有些人簡單粗暴地對待。當你與人發(fā)生沖突時，你會如何處理呢？請你寫一篇英語短文，談談你的經歷與看法。內容包括：1. 請你簡單敘述一次與別人發(fā)生沖突的經歷；2. 你認為該如何正確處理日常生活中發(fā)生的沖突（至少兩點建議）；3. 呼吁大家友好相處。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名。2. 語句連貫，詞數80左右。作文的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。Life is full of the unexpected, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should municate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each ’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。8．請你根據以下內容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見一個錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過來取回錢包并對玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺得……參考詞匯：社區(qū) munity 身份證 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主 owner要求：（1）詞數：80～100個。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。The Story of LinglingLast week_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The Story of LinglingLast Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the munity. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the munity. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good should learn from her.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據以下內容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時態(tài)用一般過去時，人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。9．書面表達 以下是你校?？痀OUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內容，請根據提示，用英語寫一篇短文，表達你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項：1. 對所有要點逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮。2. 要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數在90個左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數；4. 文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is