【正文】 hat can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang. He got the first prize in last year39。s pingpang petition.You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me為題，介紹一個曾經(jīng)激勵過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個激勵過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個人；然后介紹他是如何激勵你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實細節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。短文有以下幾個優(yōu)點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個人是誰，第二段描寫了這個人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，動詞形式變化準確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù)形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn39。t talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and pingpang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he 。8．書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。 生活中常常會發(fā)生一些意外的事，但每個人處理事情的方式不同。有些人冷靜溫和地處理，有些人簡單粗暴地對待。當你與人發(fā)生沖突時，你會如何處理呢？請你寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕慕?jīng)歷與看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 請你簡單敘述一次與別人發(fā)生沖突的經(jīng)歷；2. 你認為該如何正確處理日常生活中發(fā)生的沖突（至少兩點建議）；3. 呼吁大家友好相處。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Life is full of the unexpected, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should municate more and put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each ’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩，請你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語——如果對方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對方的來信。