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y solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意:,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon,I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先要注意書信的書寫格式,要對(duì)來信中的問題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時(shí)在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。9.假如你是韓梅,你的一位英國(guó)筆友Kate發(fā)來電子郵件,說她下星期來中國(guó),她向你詢問中國(guó)的餐桌禮儀。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給她回一封電子郵件,告訴她有關(guān)情況。詞數(shù)80~100。提示:;;;;、健康、成功干杯……Dear kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the chinese table manners.In China. the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can eat until everyone is at the table. Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Wele to China!Yours,Han Mei【解析】【詳解】本文是書信寫作,注意書信寫作格式,開頭與結(jié)尾。把自己當(dāng)做韓梅,切不可在文中出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)名字等信息。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫;,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型:In 。the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders ,主人不會(huì)先把每道菜都吃完。You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to 。Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or ,你應(yīng)該為主人的長(zhǎng)壽、健康或成功干杯?!军c(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過程中,將要點(diǎn)展開并表達(dá)清楚,注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達(dá)。