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____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】These days, students in our class are discussing how to celebrate our graduation. Here are some ideas from my friends.Jane plans to hold a big party with her friends to relax and have fun. Tom will cook a big meal for his parents. He wants to thank them for what they have done for him. Cathy is going to be a volunteer. She wants to show others that she has grown up and is able to help those in need.As for me, I will go traveling around with my friends. Traveling can not only enrich my knowledge but also leave me a good memory with my friends.【解析】試題分析:這是一篇話題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。仔細(xì)審閱題意,不要遺漏要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!緦懽髁咙c(diǎn)】這篇短文語(yǔ)句通順,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。特別一些固定句型和短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用,使文章增色,例如,plan to,not only …but also…等,上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。8. 2018年11月15日泰州市召開(kāi)了深化全國(guó)文明城市創(chuàng)建迎檢部署會(huì),會(huì)上我市正式啟動(dòng)了“泰有禮”全民主題實(shí)踐活動(dòng),形成崇德向善、文明有禮的道德風(fēng)尚和城市標(biāo)識(shí),同時(shí)組織“泰有禮”志愿服務(wù)隊(duì)伍,圍繞“文明禮讓”“文明交通”“文明餐飲”“文明上網(wǎng)”等文明實(shí)踐活動(dòng),承擔(dān)起對(duì)市民日常行為進(jìn)行勸導(dǎo)的責(zé)任。假如你是其中的一名志愿者,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇150字左右的英語(yǔ)短文。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(以上背景內(nèi)容無(wú)需表達(dá)) 內(nèi)容提示: ,幫助他們做家務(wù)活;,排隊(duì)候車,不隨地吐痰、不亂扔垃圾;不在公共場(chǎng)所抽煙、喧嘩(比如在圖書館或博物館),不撒謊,不說(shuō)臟話;,幫助別人;坐車時(shí)請(qǐng)讓座給老人,殘疾人,尤其抱小孩的婦女;,做到紅燈停,綠燈行;。 要求:,字跡工整:可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;、校名、地名成其他真實(shí)信息;As a member of the city, I think we should______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【答案】As a member of the city, I think we should respect our parents at home, and help them with the housework. While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior, such as waiting for a bus in line. We should never spit or litter everywhere. What’s more, we can’t smoke or talk aloud in public, such as in the library or the museum. During our daily lives, we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words because it’s rude to others. Also we should be polite and helpful to others. When we are on the bus, we can give our seats to the old and the disabled, especially the women with babies in their arms. And we should obey the traffic rules. Remember to stop when the traffic light is red and walk when the traffic light is green. Don39。t forget to protect our environment. Though we are young, we can still do something to help. I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!【解析】【詳解】本文就具體的話題給出一定的范圍。所以用得特別多的句式是we should| ought to do sth ……。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,至少包括五個(gè)點(diǎn):we should respect our parents at home。While we are travelling, we should pay attention to our own behavior。We should never spit or litter everywhere。we ought to be honest, never tell lies or say bad words。及we should be polite and helpful to others等。Don39。t forget to protect our environment補(bǔ)充作者個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。最后用I’m sure our city will bee more and more beautiful and cleaner as long as we all try our best to do something for it!總結(jié)全文,表達(dá)每個(gè)人都出一份力,我們的城市會(huì)越來(lái)越美。文中針對(duì)現(xiàn)象提出想法,時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),且用第一人稱陳述?!军c(diǎn)睛】9. 近年來(lái),隨著智能手機(jī)的普及,越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生開(kāi)始使用手機(jī)來(lái)完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論,為此,英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開(kāi)設(shè)專欄討論這一話題,你采訪了一些同學(xué),寫了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下:支持者反對(duì)者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。自從使用手機(jī)以來(lái),視力變差。一個(gè)理由……(12句)一個(gè)理由……(12句)你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎?給出你的理由……(23句),要求語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫;;,短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);,寫在試卷其他部位無(wú)效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干,這是屬于看法類的作文,那么在寫這類作文時(shí),首先要分別寫出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因,最后要說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來(lái)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ):practice doing ;learn by oneself自學(xué);lead to導(dǎo)致;it is adj. for us to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō),做某事是怎樣的;in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型:There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ,這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來(lái),他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。