【正文】 e was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。9．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)（advantage）；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)（disadvantage）， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu)shopping online。 商品 goods。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題展開討論。“掃雪機(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對(duì)孩子的愛才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動(dòng)筆寫作。： 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。：短語(yǔ)：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。