【正文】 lease give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。8．書面表達(dá)初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請給七月的你寫一封信，談?wù)勀闵磉叴嬖诘膯栴}，你打算如何解決，鼓勵自己生活還有詩和遠(yuǎn)方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。要求：1．表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，語句通順，上下文連貫； 2．必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。9．“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕?、非謂語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細(xì)，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細(xì)描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。