【正文】 ore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動(dòng)筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。【點(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。11．F解析：Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s helpful to people39。s health.（優(yōu)勢(shì)） However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題） In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn)，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。s known that it has many advantages.，F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據(jù)問題給出個(gè)人建議。12．B解析：Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：。（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語從句，定語從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun，in order to，as for，in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。13．A解析：My Life At SchoolHow time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember. In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing. I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進(jìn)行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達(dá)出來。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達(dá)。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。14．A解析：The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。15．D解析：Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting act