【正文】 longevity, good health or success of the host or ，你應(yīng)該為主人的長壽、健康或成功干杯。【點(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過程中，將要點(diǎn)展開并表達(dá)清楚，注意使用英語的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語表達(dá)。7．“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉， 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣， 學(xué)習(xí)才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀闶窃趺醋龅?，以及為什么這樣做。提示詞語： get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題： ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談?wù)勛约旱暮玫膶W(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在寫作時(shí),要根據(jù)提出的幾個(gè)問題為中心圍繞展開，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁?. 例文點(diǎn)評：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，語言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。8． 人類只有一個(gè)地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動(dòng)筆前首先要認(rèn)真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文包含了所有要點(diǎn)，能圍繞內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，具有較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力。層次清晰，語言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實(shí)，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文9．“苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開。”我們大多數(shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇話題作文。【詳解】根據(jù)題干““苔花如米小，也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖微不足道，但也能有所作為。請以“One Thing I Felt Very Proud Of”為題用英語寫一篇短文，描述你曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情?！币罂芍?，本文用一般過去時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：開篇點(diǎn)題——我將介紹曾做過的引以自豪的一件事情。第二部分：文章主體——具體介紹這件事情的始末。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。這些內(nèi)容用一般過去時(shí)，注意動(dòng)詞的過去式變形。第三部分：總結(jié)全文——我為自己感到驕傲。