【正文】 ，書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀(guān)點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語(yǔ)句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀(guān)點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文。9．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80100詞． 豐富的校本課程可以讓你的生活更精彩．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列圖示中所提供的特色課程，按內(nèi)容及要求，用英文完成寫(xiě)作．內(nèi)容包括：1．Whichcourse（s）doyoulike？2．Whydoyoulikeit/them？3．Whatcanyoulearnfromit/them？寫(xiě)作要求：1．依據(jù)你的興趣選擇課程（數(shù)量不限）；2．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名及姓名． Ofallthecourses，Ilike __________________________．【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something different for my parents.I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.【解析】【詳解】。本題屬于材料作文，主要講述你喜歡的學(xué)科、原因以及你從你選擇的學(xué)科中學(xué)到了什么。注意時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型。切記不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的文章，很好地完成了試題中所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。條理清晰。前三段分別講述他所喜歡的學(xué)科（體育、剪紙和廚藝），并解釋愿意以及收獲，最后一段講述這些學(xué)科對(duì)他的生活的意義。：?jiǎn)卧~短語(yǔ)：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí)，形容詞放后面。高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容詞修飾復(fù)合不定代詞時(shí)，形容詞放后面等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。最近他對(duì)母親節(jié)你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫(xiě)信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫(xiě)信目的——朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。