【正文】 , in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)“Life is like a box of of never know what you are going to get next.”Forrest Gump 中文譯名：《阿甘正傳》“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名：《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追夢(mèng)人）.”P(pán)resident Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們：生活是豐富多彩的，有快樂(lè)幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方，便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)以Dream Chaser為題，談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)提示：，并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實(shí)；，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；，積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)；。寫(xiě)作要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫； ，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇材料作文。主要說(shuō)明要有自己的目標(biāo)，努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，使自己不斷強(qiáng)大；正確面對(duì)困難，積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。：例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章開(kāi)頭，句意完整，避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，敘述條理清晰。：高分短語(yǔ)：feel satisfied；feel upset；e true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。10．書(shū)面表達(dá) 我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見(jiàn)整理成一篇書(shū)面材料，報(bào)告給學(xué)校。 同意 ：1．多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女，不會(huì)做事。 2．學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)做艱苦的工作。 3．學(xué)會(huì)理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動(dòng)。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。 2．不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 注意：1．短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫(xiě)出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語(yǔ)：argument爭(zhēng)論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì)；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動(dòng)以來(lái)，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)激烈的爭(zhēng)論。現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)（have/has+done）。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作的好機(jī)會(huì)。動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，疑問(wèn)詞+to do。