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ve to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。主要說(shuō)明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對(duì)困難,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。:例文用第一人稱來(lái)敘述主要內(nèi)容;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。承接文章開(kāi)頭,句意完整,避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),敘述條理清晰。:高分短語(yǔ):feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。10.C解析: The Changes in ClassThanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】【詳解】假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革,經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng),同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的文章,談?wù)勀愕母惺芎拖敕?,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練文中運(yùn)用了一些好的句型:We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this 。11.F解析:Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。s known that it has many advantages. So it39。s enjoyed by lots of people.First of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。s helpful to people39。s health.(優(yōu)勢(shì)) However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.(難題) In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】(建議)【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富,表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語(yǔ),為文章增色不少,.如: It39。s known that it has many advantages.,F(xiàn)irst of all, it39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“Bikesharing”為題,根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇短文,表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時(shí),考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn):首先,闡述共享單車的優(yōu)點(diǎn);其次,列舉共享單車帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題;最后,根據(jù)問(wèn)題給出個(gè)人建議。12.B解析:Students in our school have one thing in mon an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to bee stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法,應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),寫作要點(diǎn)要包括:。(多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn))。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),主謂一致,在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,定語(yǔ)從句,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如have fun,in order to,as for,in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,句子通順,行文連貫。13.B解析:We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文??梢苑秩螌憽5谝欢我獙懣傮w交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊;讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻浚纯从心男┮??哪些時(shí)態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說(shuō)明文?議論文?看圖?還是應(yīng)用文?,單一還是混合。、短語(yǔ)、句型。,并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^(guò)渡詞銜接。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤(rùn)色,人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題,注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到:要點(diǎn)要全,表達(dá)要清晰明確,使用短語(yǔ),句型要準(zhǔn)確,注意避免拼寫和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。14.D解析:Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題,接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因,最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處because of, in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15.G解析:Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of probl