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them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9.書面表達你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學校的選擇。請你以“A boarding school or a day school”為題。寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容須包括:讀寄宿學校的利和弊;讀走讀學校的利和弊;你的選擇和理由(不得與上述兩點內(nèi)容重復)。注意:1. 詞數(shù)。100詞左右(文章開頭結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息;3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發(fā)揮。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to graduate from our middle school, __________________________________【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time puter games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇給材料作文??梢苑秩螌?。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中,面臨寄宿(a boarding school)和走讀(a day school)兩類學校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細敘述讀寄宿學校的利弊;讀走讀學校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?!驹斀狻?,看看有哪些要求?哪些時態(tài)?人稱?,記敘文?說明文?議論文?看圖?還是應用文?,單一還是混合。、短語、句型。,并運用適當?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。寫完后反復閱讀修改推敲潤色,人稱、時態(tài)、單復數(shù)一致等。運用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型:both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來增加了文章的亮點。【點睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認真審題,注意過渡性語言的使用。做到:要點要全,表達要清晰明確,使用短語,句型要準確,注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。10.環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項:,條理清楚,作適當發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染,大氣污染...... 應對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境(至少兩條)...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示,動筆先應先認真閱讀提示,確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式,注意在表達不同觀點時,連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣?!军c睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹,內(nèi)容完整,用了表格中的信息。2.句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然,順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。