高中英語(yǔ)寫作示范課(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 … Besides/ In addition… ? help me out of many difficulties ? fort me when I’m upset ? stand by me and care about me …. ? live a better life ? be much more energetic ? lead me to success ? give me courage to get over all difficulties prewriting whilewriting postwriting Good endings 1) End with a summary In a word, I want to smile. Only in this way can I … 2) End by restating the main idea in another way In a word, a smile is ... So I want to smile. 3) End by calling for action In a word, I want to smile. My fellow students, ... please. 4) End with wishes If everyone smiles at …, our world will be… prewriting whilewriting postwriting Writing Tips 1. Try to use advanced vocabulary. 2. Try to use some varied sentence patterns. 3. Try to use proper linking words. Drafting prewriting whilewriting postwriting Checking and polishing ASSESSMENT Structure Is the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence? Content Are all the details stated? Is everything to the point(切題 )? Language Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? Is there any advanced vocabulary? Are there any good sentence patterns? prewriting whilewriting postwriting What’s more, … Smile at my parents or friends is important. It can make you getting on well with your parents and friends, no argues and no fightings. Smiling is a make friends’s way. get Smili
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