用心積累強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練巧婦有米可炊(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you! 一模作文特點(diǎn)： ? 文體：應(yīng)用文之演講稿 ? 題示方式：文字 ? 話題：貼近考生實(shí)際，考生有話可說。 ? 體裁： 屬于開放性作文，學(xué)生可圍繞話題 及題目要求，抒發(fā)自己的感受。 我校學(xué)生的得分情況 : 平均分（ ） 檔次 第五檔 第四檔 第三檔 第二檔 第一檔 分?jǐn)?shù)段 2630 2125 162O（ ） 1115() 010() 人數(shù) 0 14 140 156 51 比重 0% % % % 第四檔具體情況： 分?jǐn)?shù)段 24 23 22 21 人數(shù) 1 0 1 1 2 2 1 6 從統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)可以看出：我們的學(xué)生在書面表達(dá)方面太過薄弱，極需提高。 學(xué)生作文中的具體問題 (1)、詞性誤用 ? So never give up, and have a big confident. ? In the end , we will be success. ? Five is better than sadness. ? In the book, Jane is a brave, kind and ability girl. (2)、詞的用法失誤 ? But which book we should to read? ? because the book is worthy to read. ? Reading good books has good effect to our life. (3)、不規(guī)則動詞變化的錯(cuò)誤 ? It teached me we should take a positive attitude towards life which can help us face difficulties and challenges bravely. ? Today I want to share a book named Watched which was wrote by a reporter and I like this book. ? How lucky we was borned in the city instead of countryside. ? It told that a lady who have a good family but she falled in love with a handsome person. (4)、句子成分缺失 ? The book told a story（ ） happened in Dong Han Dynasty. ? I learn from the old man a saying ( ) goes “ You can kill me, but nobody can beat me.” ? As far as I ( ) concerned, there is a book called Lun Yu ( ) affect me a lot. (5)、中式英語 ? Maybe they not have a enough good book to spend time reading. ? It tells me our moms are much love us. ? Today, I take my best friend e here. ? And this book’s some stories are very interesting. （ 6）、單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤不少 ? Today I have a speach for this class. ? I also belive the books you read can shape your personality and help you a lot. ? Though other peting army is stronge, Edward and Bella fight against them in order to save their daughter. (7)、句子拖沓 ? I’m glad to be here today and it’s my great honor to deliver a speech here. Today I’m going to talk about “ A good book can affect our life”. (8)邏輯上失誤 ? Believe me, reading more books can open your eyes, can give you some surprise, though it can make you happy. 五、書面表達(dá)復(fù)習(xí)對策 ? （ 1）、用心積累 ? ? 書面表達(dá)的考綱要求：考查考生有效運(yùn)用語言知識清楚連貫地表達(dá)意思。
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