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ending替換bination of different cultures;圖中的“火鍋”一詞可使用hot pot/chaffy dish/chafing dish等交替使用;“仁”可用kindheartedness/benevolence交替使用;而在表達(dá)“多元文化”這一概念時(shí)可用multiculture/mosaic culture/pluralistic culture進(jìn)行同義替換,使用這些不同的表達(dá)方式避免了語(yǔ)言的重復(fù),使詞匯表達(dá)更加豐富多彩?! ?dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確使用是吸引閱卷者的手段之一。例如本作文中可用“harbor the idea that/take the attitude that/hold the view that/it is widely shared that/it is universally acknowledged that...”替換“think;Many people from different countries have been deeply fascinated(替換att