【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 出的開(kāi)頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過(guò)去美好的回憶以及不開(kāi)心的事情；最后一段對(duì)未來(lái)進(jìn)行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達(dá)自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語(yǔ)，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。3．書面表達(dá)安全對(duì)于每個(gè)人都很重要。中學(xué)生年齡較小，學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生安全的英語(yǔ)作文。內(nèi)容提示：：遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅綠燈等；：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；：進(jìn)行體育鍛煉時(shí)，不要弄傷自己，不私自下河游泳等。提示詞語(yǔ)：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱。寫作時(shí)注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)適當(dāng)使用連接詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：祈使句的使用、wemust、weshould、inaword、It’s+形容詞+to動(dòng)詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)以及序數(shù)詞的使用等，這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累，牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。4．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人，創(chuàng)建城市文明，爭(zhēng)做文明市民” 活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下漢語(yǔ)提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1. 上周三放學(xué)時(shí)，雨下得很大，于是在校門口打了一輛出租車；2. 下車時(shí)由于匆忙把英語(yǔ)書落在車上；書上有你的姓名；3. 到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見(jiàn)時(shí)，感到很焦急；4. 幸運(yùn)的是第二天早上，司機(jī)把書送到學(xué)校；5. 當(dāng)看到自己的書時(shí)，既開(kāi)心又感動(dòng)；6. 你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要. …參考詞匯：感動(dòng)be moved幸運(yùn)的是fortunately要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80100；2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello，everyone！I am Li Hua from Guangming, Middle School.Last Wednesday，when I finished school，it was_______________________________________________【答案】Hello，everyone！I am Li Hua from Guangming Middle School.Last Wednesday，when I finished school，it was raining hard（1）.Then l took a taxi at the school gate（2）.But I left my English book in the taxi（3）because l was in a hurry when L got out of it（4）.There was my name in my book（5）.When l got home and found my book gone. I felt very worried and sad（6）Fotunately /Luckily，the next morning，the kindhearted driver sent it to my school（7）.I was very happy and moved（8）when I saw my book e back. I think I should learn from the driver（9）.And I am going to set up a lost and found website to help the people who need help（10）.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你所正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人，創(chuàng)建城市文明，爭(zhēng)做文明市民” 的這個(gè)活動(dòng)。所提供的信息中列舉了1. 上周三放學(xué)時(shí)，雨下得很大，于是在校門口打了一輛出租車；2. 下車時(shí)由于匆忙把英語(yǔ)書落在車上；書上有你的姓名；3. 到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見(jiàn)時(shí)，感到很焦急；4. 幸運(yùn)的是第二天早上，司機(jī)把書送到學(xué)校；5. 當(dāng)看到自己的書時(shí)，既開(kāi)心又感動(dòng)；6. 你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要. …；主要從這六個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意發(fā)作文中必須包含提示上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 left my English book in the taxi because I was in a hurry when I got out of it. 我把英語(yǔ)書忘在出租車上了，因?yàn)槲蚁萝嚂r(shí)很匆忙。句子I because I was in a hurry when I got out of ?！靖叻志湫投縄 was very happy and moved when I saw my book e back. 當(dāng)我看到我的書回來(lái)時(shí)，我非常高興和感動(dòng)。句子when I saw my book e 。5．書面表達(dá) 以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項(xiàng)：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________