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出的開頭,作者使用一句話引出下文;第二段是主體,介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情;最后一段對未來進行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理,有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,語法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確,注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體,表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。3.書面表達安全對于每個人都很重要。中學(xué)生年齡較小,學(xué)生安全更是人們關(guān)注的焦點。請根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生安全的英語作文。內(nèi)容提示::遵守交通規(guī)則,不闖紅綠燈等;:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等;:進行體育鍛煉時,不要弄傷自己,不私自下河游泳等。提示詞語:study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers – so their safety is being a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時,主語是第一人稱。寫作時注意人稱、時態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題。同時適當(dāng)使用連接詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c睛】這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點內(nèi)容,表達準(zhǔn)確,意思連貫,符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了簡單句和復(fù)合句,文章脈絡(luò)清晰,自然流暢。同時,文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語,如:祈使句的使用、wemust、weshould、inaword、It’s+形容詞+to動詞不定式結(jié)構(gòu)以及序數(shù)詞的使用等,這為文章增色不少。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累,牢記一些常用句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。4.假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,你正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人,創(chuàng)建城市文明,爭做文明市民” 活動,請根據(jù)以下漢語提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1. 上周三放學(xué)時,雨下得很大,于是在校門口打了一輛出租車;2. 下車時由于匆忙把英語書落在車上;書上有你的姓名;3. 到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見時,感到很焦急;4. 幸運的是第二天早上,司機把書送到學(xué)校;5. 當(dāng)看到自己的書時,既開心又感動;6. 你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要. …參考詞匯:感動be moved幸運的是fortunately要求:1. 詞數(shù):80100;2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3. 要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello,everyone!I am Li Hua from Guangming, Middle School.Last Wednesday,when I finished school,it was_______________________________________________【答案】Hello,everyone!I am Li Hua from Guangming Middle School.Last Wednesday,when I finished school,it was raining hard(1).Then l took a taxi at the school gate(2).But I left my English book in the taxi(3)because l was in a hurry when L got out of it(4).There was my name in my book(5).When l got home and found my book gone. I felt very worried and sad(6)Fotunately /Luckily,the next morning,the kindhearted driver sent it to my school(7).I was very happy and moved(8)when I saw my book e back. I think I should learn from the driver(9).And I am going to set up a lost and found website to help the people who need help(10).【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)提示中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你所正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人,創(chuàng)建城市文明,爭做文明市民” 的這個活動。所提供的信息中列舉了1. 上周三放學(xué)時,雨下得很大,于是在校門口打了一輛出租車;2. 下車時由于匆忙把英語書落在車上;書上有你的姓名;3. 到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見時,感到很焦急;4. 幸運的是第二天早上,司機把書送到學(xué)校;5. 當(dāng)看到自己的書時,既開心又感動;6. 你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要. …;主要從這六個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般過去時,人稱為第一人稱。注意發(fā)作文中必須包含提示上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習(xí)慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 left my English book in the taxi because I was in a hurry when I got out of it. 我把英語書忘在出租車上了,因為我下車時很匆忙。句子I because I was in a hurry when I got out of 。【高分句型二】I was very happy and moved when I saw my book e back. 當(dāng)我看到我的書回來時,我非常高興和感動。句子when I saw my book e 。5.書面表達 以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容,請根據(jù)提示,用英語寫一篇短文,表達你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項:1. 對所有要點逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境;3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右,感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________