【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4．親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。請以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示：（校園干凈而美麗，活動非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識，教會做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵）；同學(xué)（和睦相處，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進步）。、老師、同學(xué)表達感謝和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的初中生活?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My name is……，I’m glad to……，Our campus is……，Our teachers teach us……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的個人情況，接下來介紹我們的校園，老師和同學(xué)，最后對學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)表達感謝和祝福。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。5．書面表達為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動，請根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯：givemuchto…，It39。smyturnto…，trymybestto…提示：1）短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容，含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件，并闡述原因；2）請注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時態(tài)運用和卷面整潔度；3）詞數(shù)80個左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove．Wealsoneedtoshowlove．ThepersonIlovemostismymother．___．【答案】My motherWe need love．We also need toshow love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn39。t have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That39。s what she wants most，I think．【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛情深，弘揚知恩圖報，要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事，參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動。在寫作時，注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)；注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。【點睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。6．書面表達在本周班會課上，同學(xué)們對“初中生什么時候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問題進行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o