【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 t us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文，要求給英文報(bào)社寫一篇投稿，介紹對(duì)共享單車看法。作文應(yīng)包括4個(gè)主要內(nèi)容，一個(gè)是社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀，第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)，第三是存在的問題，最后發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意上下文的連貫，將這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)的連接起來，不要逐句翻譯。使用一些好的句型和短語，注意正確的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)以及謂語動(dòng)詞的形式，還需要注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣的不同，讓整篇短文表達(dá)流暢。5．書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開展了一次主題班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。常 識(shí)歷史悠久，深受喜愛世界杯4年舉行一次好 處男生女生皆可參加利于培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）偶 像梅西，有足球天賦夢(mèng) 想考生自擬（至少1點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：梅西 MessiDear classmates,I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 footballthemed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 footballthemed schools by 2020．Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to bee a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．Thank you for your attention．【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要求仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三個(gè)方面來寫：介紹足球運(yùn)動(dòng)及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡(jiǎn)潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。6．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭(zhēng)吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語單詞。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縊ne possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up